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My Neglected Mother

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Natalie lost her mum when she was fifteen and she has adopted Fiona Bishop as a full-time surrogate. They go shopping together and to the theatre and to the cinema to see films that would boor me to tears. And sometimes, when my wife comes back from some expedition with mum, I catch her giving me speculative looks and I wonder what she's thinking. Is she wondering why I moved back in with my mum when dad left, even though I had my own flat? Is she wondering if there was something else between us apart from normal maternal love?

She may ask one day. And I may tell her.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Another excellent story from one of the best authors. Love the long storyline and the slow progression. Surprised at the very end. Why would the wife wonder about the mother and son unless there are hints of continuing romance. Not clear if they live together as one big happy family. And why would he risk everything by confessing, what will he gain but more likely lose everything, particularly the incest was many years past.

MySecretGuyMySecretGuy6 months ago

Well written, plot clearly planned and with a so. so sensible and realistic ending.

Coochielover71Coochielover716 months ago

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Excellent, with many strengths in the story, but I aim at one particular strength.

The description of Mum is excellent.

"Mum's... just an ordinary suburban housewife who's grown into late middle-age....

She's not amazingly pretty and with a model's figure either....

She's quite tall - about five-eight - ... She's got quite broad shoulders, full breasts, wide hips and long, strong-looking legs. ... nondescript brown hair but it's gone a rather lovely steel grey and it's lush and thick...

Facially, she's a bit Marmite - some people find her attractive and others don't. I'd say her face is characterful: ... She's got lovely dark-blue eyes which sparkle when she laughs, which isn't often, nowadays....

... I think she could look quite nice if she used a bit of make-up but she usually doesn't bother much. She doesn't bother much with her clothes either..."

He does find her attractive, but not beautiful, and he does not call her beautiful at this point, which seems a mistake (not many mistakes in this tale, and this one actually isn't one...), but the potential is there.

As they grow together emotionally and physically, and she takes more care with her appearance, she blooms again, and she starts believing herself attractive again, and our hero finds her so as well. It's a journey for both of them, and they arrive together, she feels desirable, and he finds her both very attractive and desirable.

This subtle method of revealing beauty has a great deal of appeal for me. SF does not use "My mum was the neighborhood MILF, just perfect and beautiful, that I had wanted since my first hard-on, and all of my mates leered at her, and gave me a lot of crap as they were drooling over her luscious body..." (which also works, but is a more, or very, common trope).

Well done, SF, Five for you

BTW, somewhat taller than average women with broad shoulders and hips, with large busts?

Yeah, they are pretty amazing,

...glad our heroine got to enjoy herself again...

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved this story it took a while before the incest but it was well written hated the way that it ended still 5 stars

TallManReinventedTallManReinvented8 months ago

Yes, definitely one of the better writers on this site. I overlook the odd spelling mistake. I like the slow build up...that always works for me. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

5 years without dad touching his wife without having sex with her yes he's cheating on his wife 5 years thats nothing try 21 years 21 long years no touching no kissing no sex of any kind she doesn't like sex at all she's 78 i'm 80 still randy i have to rub my cock yes i wank off yes she's sleeping her back to me snoring her head off, nights without sleep feeling very randy cock hard yes rub yes wank again. its all .i have

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Very nice written story 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

We know it was coming. No surprise, none expected. Yet this woman is such a sympathetic character there her happiness is ours as well.

That she finds fulfillment, family, love - even grandchildren is so very, very satisfying.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Loved this story you brought it together real well their love grew slowly into incest and glad she kicked her cheating worthless husband out!!!!!!!!!!! %stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved thus story and his gradual seduction of his mother was awesome was glad she kicked out her worthless cheating husband hated when they stopped their affair and then he was married and had children you should continue and have him tell his wife about their affair 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It's a shame this one had to end felt their was more to come from this very good story .I've liked reading this as much as I enjoyed reading fantasy fishers REAL ESTATE POWER COUPLE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very nice story loved it and the build up was right on target and their love for each other was felt in the writing but the end was a little quick there should have been a little slow down in there sexual activity then the end 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story. I loved the buildup taking time for things to develop physically. Women can still be attractive in their 60's, My grandmother highlighted her hair to hide the grey. She's tall, fit and thin. Her tits are more than a handful with not much sag to them. She looks so good in her bikini that I am always hard. She takes noticeable glances at my hard cock and her nipples get very hard making my cock throb.

nortythortsnortythortsabout 1 year ago

Red hot, and loved the gradual build up, it was erotic and also made it more believable. The ages, especially the mother's, are also a welcome change. 5 stars from me

amsterdamamsterdamabout 1 year ago

Wonderful writing as per usual. Thank you, and keep them coming...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very hot story. Being in my 40’s I prefer when the mother is older than the usual stories. Especially liked the oral sex description and red lipstick especially hits home for me

killerbeeezkillerbeeezabout 1 year ago

What's with this genre of unattractive mothers? It's fiction, she doesn't have to be a old bat.

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumabout 1 year ago

Excellent story. Very erotic about the buildup of the physical contact of the two of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Captures so much of the emotion of making love to one’s mother. Wonderful

P_AndererP_Andererabout 1 year ago

Great story, 5*!

Thank you for your work :)

ekim22ekim22about 1 year ago

5 stars. Love the build up and the suspenders!

IveBignuttsIveBignuttsabout 1 year ago

A wonderful little gem of a story between mother and son. So very well written ... as usual, when the author is Sylviafan. It's nicely paced and full of love and passion until the end. Some readers mentioned wishing to read a sequel to it and I do agree. Fiona and Natalie seem to have developed a close relationship ... maybe even some complicity together. Who knows ... she might know much more than what Martin thinks. I have such a vivid imagination and would dare suggest that a threesome might become a reality. But I will let the author decide on his intentions should there be a second chapter.

Well done Sylviafan. I always enjoy reading your stories. Another 5 stars !

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