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Shaking her head at the conversation, hearing Aydin bounding quickly up the stairs. Knowing her boy was so good to her as she rose, taking Aydin by his hand and leading him to her old bedroom. Their room was only for them; she would never defile it by bringing Franklin or Aydin into it. When Emma was over, that didn't count since they both were in it at that time.
To Be Continued...
- COMMENTS
I think 1 or 2 more chapters should be good to be honest. He cucks dad, gets him fired, marry his mom. His brother's get Emma while they also go pro in there respected sport while drake becomes a great architect.
Fantastic. This was a great story. Now, just looking forward to the next chapter
5stars
Great chapter and one of my favorite stories, only thing I don't like is how Iliana still sleeps with Franklyn and aiyden after having such a serious relationship with drake,
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Awesome series, but I do have a few comments. Drake's parents are both seriously flawed characters, so I struggle with the attempt to make Mario to look worse than Illiana. In hindsight, Mario's defilement of their marriage and her family seems worse, but she didn't know about his affair until after she was screwing her sons. I can't get fully involved in Drake's emotional relationship with his mother while she continues to screw her other two sons after she and Drake have committed to each other. Likewise, he was tormented by his brothers his entire life, yet your version of Drake has no problem with it and gives no push back even though he is now their equal or better. I call bullshit! I also struggle with Drake continuing to do random hookups with women despite his pledged love for his mother. (Not talking about his job, rather the cheerleader and waitress.) Does he want children some day? We don't really know his mother's age, at least I don't recall seeing it, so not sure if she can still have kids or not. I rarely give this in depth of comment regarding plot, but your stories are always excellent, but often times are about 10 degrees out of phase with the universe. LOL! 5*
I'm really liking the direction you're going with the main story and the sub-plots with Emma and Cybil. Can't wait to see what starts happening with the women and daughters knowing about him, maybe let him use the threat of blackballing them but give them a chance to help him? If I was to be honest though, the one thing I'm not too keen on is including Becky in the revenge plan. Sure she knew bout being their half-sister, but it was just from a while before the divorce and she did, and still does, feel guilty about keeping it a secret like her mom made her. My hope would be for her to honestly fall for Drake, let her find out what shits her parents have been to his family, and she sides with him to help get back at them. Hah, maybe after Idin gets turned out Frank and Aiyden can start using her, free up Ilianna (get the feeling she's still doing it only out of habit, saw the mention of her feelings on that), then her, Drake, and Becky be a thing. Well, just my wishful hopes on that particular part. Be waiting for the next part!
Great new installment to an already great story look forward to more.
does anyone else see a ? inside of a diamond when they read the story