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OK, Could Be More Challenging
Pretty good story, but you make it too easy for the protagonist. There could be some resistance, challenge in the subjects. Make it harder for him, introduce some conflict.
Excellent!
Excellent Story.... Mabey you should "go back" to the time of the injury.... Can't wait to see what happens!
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