All Comments on 'Obsession: She Must Have Her Father'

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Nice, imagine having such a loving daughter as this. Exciting and sexy little story, thanks for sharing

terrible Story trash writing YOURE describing sex quite matter of fact no imagery of ludt protagonist seems mechanical and unlikeale

I liked it--I wish there was more time between dad and daughter. The reasons I didn't give it a 5 is that I thought the daughter came off as too (not sure which word to use here) selfish, demanding, critical, bossy in bed, snotty little twit...and the worst of all a cheater. She cheated on her boyfriend and her best friend all because she was horny? She took all the romance, erotic feelings, kink, and any passion out of it for me. Comparing her dad to Cody and worried that since Holly exaggerated her dads size he might not come twice and it was all about her, her, her, her. And I wish the sex scenes were a little more descriptive. How did it feel? What were they feeling during sex? This just felt a little too clinical, insensitive and cold to me. Your a first time read to me but I will definitely read another one of your stories. Overall I like the writing itself. You asked....

I would love to see where this story goes.

Please continue this story i wish to see where it leads to in future chapters, 5 stars

I loved your story and want to see more of what happens with you and your Father. The only thing that I wasn't crazy about was you were comparing Cody and your Father too many times. Thanks for sharing.

Ended too abruptly…hopefully there will be a followup with Holly joining in.

Agree with others. It felt like it was just hitting its stride and then it ended. Weird pacing.