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PDA in a discreet way. The loser gets punished.
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There are things in a relationship that a couple should share with others.

Such as, the excitement they share when they are together. The couple allow people to see the happiness they have when they are in the presence of one another.

Here are a few examples of how he shares their happy relationship in public.

He opens her car door.

He holds the entrance door to the restaurant for her.

He leans over and gives her a peck on the cheek for no apparent reason.

He rises from his seat when she has to leave the table.

These gestures are a sign of respect. He does not do these actions for her because he thinks she is weak. He does them because he is caring for her. She is capable of opening doors by herself. She is not so fragile that she would be upset if she were not acknowledged when she left a table.

But, it is being shown to all that he will protect her and she can find comfort in him at all times.

Here are a few examples of how she shares their happy relationship in public.

She accepts his hand on the small of her back as a way of saying he will be standing over by the table as she is talking with friends.

She winks at him as she walks into the room.

She leans over and gives him a peck on the cheek for no apparent reason.

These gestures are her ways of showing signs of respect. She does not do them because she thinks he will forget about her if she does not remind him that she is present. She truly knows that she is on his mind. It is her way of telling him that he is wanted and she acknowledges his strength and passion to protect her.

It is good for people to see how a couple that have a healthy relationship interact with one another. It motivates them to treat their partner with respect and adoration.

The sincerity in the couples actions towards one another allows the public to see a healthy and fun relationship.

What the public does not see is the way the couple assures one another of their personal respect and adoration while out in public.

While sitting next to one another, he reaches his hand under the table and rests it on her leg. A squeeze. A few strokes with his thumb. An innocent gesture of affection.

With a slight movement of his hand, he moves to the crease of her hip and leg.

Not noticeable to the couple sitting across the table.

Conversation continues.

He picks up his drink with his free hand, takes a sip and returns it to its previous wet circle located on the napkin. The other couple has no idea his other hand had just moved in between her legs and is pressed on her lips. A slight movement and her clit feels the pressure and begins to harden.

Her undetected movement of sliding herself to the edge of the chair helps her curve her back. This, in turn, slightly opens her legs and allows her to grind on his hand ever so slightly.

The situation could have gone differently.

She places her hand on his thigh. Stirs her drink with the speared olive that leans on the edge of her drink. Slowly lifts it to her outstretched tongue that guides it to her pursed lips.

She can feel him harden. She knows he was watching her out of the corner of his eye as he feigns interest in the conversation with the other couple. She grips him and firmly squeezes as she leans forward and rests her elbow on the table. Each time she giggles or shifts her weight she grips harder. When she releases, she scrapes with her fingernails then rests her hand again. He turns slightly in his chair, so he can rock his leg back and forth with her hand in place.

The couples admiration for one another goes beyond the publics seeing eyes. It began before they left the house. They decided to play a little game. They wanted to see how far they could push one another until one called it quits.

"Let's play a game", one would say.

"A game where we discretely turn each other on."

"No one would know."

"Only us."

"Whomever has to stop, loses."

"The loser will have to pull a punishment out of the punishment jar when we get home."

The agreement is made and sealed with a kiss.

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johnpassionjohnpassionover 4 years agoAuthor
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I agree with you 100%.

My other writings include the items you have mentioned. This particular writing was one that jumped into my head as I was returning from a call while on shift. It was a playful thought of: Hmmm...It would be fun to create an outline of thought that depicts a flirtatious couple that has to discreetly tease the other in public.

When I got back to the firehouse and returned to writing, this was the result.

My other writings on her develop the foreplay, the passion and desire for one another and expand those thoughts in a complete story.

In the future, I will apply your thoughts and suggestions in my submissions. Your points are valid to me and I appreciate your feedback.

Thank you,

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Clinical

Every one has different likes and dislikes. Personally, when it comes to erotic stories and personal experiences, I like for my partner to desire me of their own free will (not because they are obligated). And I like to feel special. Special is when my partner gives me personal access to private aspects that are limited to a very limited list of people / ideally with only my name in it. That special is shown by reluctance to give special access. Add in mystery of wondering “will I get special access? And how much access?” Sometimes there is more value when it costs more, or when one of us risks more. Your writing above comes across as opinion, followed by anecdote. To me it is very cold and clinical. Where is the build up of some kind of emotion? Where is the mystery? I don’t feel any personal connection to anyone in your story. Write about the foreplay that makes it exciting to you. Then consider finding some of the volunteers on this site who are willing to help you by giving you advice and see what they say before publishing - they will be able to provide much better advice than I ever could. You have good grammar and other writing skills, so you have a shot at some great literature. Good luck.

johnpassionjohnpassionover 4 years agoAuthor
anonymous

I appreciate your comment. Do you have suggestions? Do you believe it should be longer, more detailed or more scenarios? My intent was to write this as, “ Hey, here are a couple of things that may be happening at the table next to you and you have no idea.”

Suggestions are always appreciated. It will help me make stories that do not get tagged “needs work”

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Needs work

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