All Comments on 'Organism X Ch. 08'

Good to see you back (though a little later than expected) with another installment. I'm really enjoying this series so far and continue to look forward to the next chapter. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

Pretty much all the stories on this site I find gross and poorly-written, this, in stark contrast, is hot as hell, and extremely well written. Keep up the good work!

One awesome story DevilBookCcorruptions. Keep up the excellent work and I can not wait for chapter 9. Well there now 10 girls who are hosts to the parasites. Plus the body count is going up, 8 dead male students and 3 military/paramilitary. I hope you do not do anything with Felica, leave just as she is at the end of chapter 6. It appears the red parasite does not have the degree of control that the green parasites have. This is shown when Felica appears to be herself before becoming a host. In this brief period when she is herself she hates herself for what she has become and done that she crushes the parasite she is holding. If it were a green parasite it would not have let her kill one of it's own. Megan is an example of the green parasite's total control over it's host. When Megan relives she has killed Brad and his roommate she is shaken to her core and wants the parasite out of her. The parasite in response to this places Megan in an organic loop which totally breaks her where all she wants is pleasure. I feel this changed Megan into sadistic, mean, and who's only thoughts were to bring more girls into the sisterhood. There will be a clash between Leah and Megan for leadership of the sisterhood. Leah has been absent and Megan has done all the leadership in adding 3 new girls to the sisterhood. With her total change in personality I do not think Megan will step aside when Leah finally shows up. Will other girls get secondary powers like Emily and Lindsay? IT should be interesting to see what powers they get. Is Megan the only one that can produce a red parasite? I hope Haley can harness her psychic powers to be able to sense who is a host to help her group fight the parasite infestation. Wardmaster 91C70

How do you keep up to date on the progress of stories like this because I absolutely love it I need to know how it continues

Hey Everyone,

It's a little hard to respond to everyone individually with the way literotica's comments system is set up, but I wanted to say I appreciate all the feedback!

As an update, the first draft of the ninth chapter of Organism X is written, but I am likely going to rewrite it drastically before it is published. I am also working on some other projects that should be coming to literotica in the next few weeks/months. I want to diversify and write across more genres. I'll also be likely focusing more on one-shots and small series rather than creating more behemoths like Organism X. However, don't worry if you're a fan of Organism X; I'm in it to finish it haha.

If you want to give advice, hear about possible spoilers, or just say hi, feel free to reach out to me through literotica's feedback system or my email listed on my profile. Thanks!

-DevilBookCorruptions