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slow start
but got better as it went along. Would have been better in the third person
Love the input!..
Thanks for the input, I really appreciate any tools that may help my writing. I'm just starting out and am experimenting. I agree with the comment above regarding 3rd person perspective but this was just an experiment.... What can I say, you're getting it for nothing... Thank you all for taking the time to check it out..
Please check out the conclusion in Chapter Two. Hope you enjoy.
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