All Comments on 'Paralegal's Punishment'

Then pair with more heated encounters between Rachael ( I involuntarily imaged young Jennifer Aniston due to the name and callow makeup of character ) and boss . Then step back as flames arise. SecretSecretary self limited complexity of story to assure intensity. Mission accomplished.

There were many errors in this story that pulled me out of it.

She had her I-phone with her and it was on "record" function. Which meant when she handed her attorney her phone he started to salivate. Marc was terminated, disbarred and sentenced to multiple years in prison. The Firm, wanting to avoid any more bad publicity paid Rachael 15 million dollars to go away. Rachael retired. Dumb story.

1 star.

Very sexy one-shot :) Loved the Secretary-esque vibe :) Keep writing!

'Awful' is the word I'd use. Harsh, I know. But true.

The story is very erotic.

The plot was well conceived.

The editor is not bad at all. I must admit that from the moment Marc called her to his office, i stopped paying attention to punctuation, vocabulary, sentence structure, spelling... The story induced vivid erotic images in my mind & i got turned on.