All Comments on 'Party Favor Pt. 03'
by TaraForFun
- 10 Comments
10 pages.. hell yeah! The last two parts were brilliant. Will comment more when I've read it allll.
Your characters feel real, especially Shane, and the way Mr Miller handles him and moves him towards his (Mr Miller's) ultimate goal, is very nicely done, and very satisfying. Hits all the right notes of d/s and care and concern. I was hoping you'd write more on this, and ten pages was a very nice surprise.
J.
Reaaaally like this story - i wonder if his parents will ever find out?! god i hope so, would be a great read!! Maybe miller will 'accidentally' get shane caught ;) hehee - please update soon:)
oh ps, also loved the reference to the spa from your other story - the idea of shane going there was a reaaally cool addition- i imagine miller is a fan of the twink special ;) x
This story is one of my favorites to fap to. So fucking hot. Thank you.
Loved this chapter and I'm really looking forward to more already
I'm loving the realistic character development. The mental conditioning from naive, straight, spoiled, high schooler to this wonderful, submissive, gay cock slut is really well laid out. Keep going!