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Click hereBefore the piece garbage could even start to explain the disgusting sight on his computer screen, I exploded. The only sounds I could hear at that point, were muffled, as if I were underwater.
I felt rather than heard a beast of a roar escape my lungs as my foot flew at the pervert's face in front of me. The coward whimpered as he rolled away, trying to escape. I could only see red at this point, as my rage escalated.
My roaring continued as I brought my foot down to connect with his side. It seemed to be enough to quench my anger, though, as the red faded in to the edges of my vision. I could hear a deep rumbling from somewhere. It suddenly dawned on me that it was my own voice and with that realization, my bedroom disappeared and I was back in the boy's shower room. I looked down and saw what was easily the most horrifying sight in my life. I thought I was on verge of dying from shock. The love of my life was on the ground in a heap of blood and what smelled like piss, letting out gut wrenching sobs. I looked up to see Max and his group still there. I couldn't understand how I had allowed them to do this to my Luch.
My heart and mind screamed to take the fuckers down and scoop my lover up so I could get him to safety. Instead, I did something that I would never be able to forgive myself for: I ran. As I left the room, I heard grunts and thuds from behind. A sudden wave of nausea took over and I barely made it to a toilet as I heaved. As the horrible sounds echoed in the distance, only one word repeated in my mind: coward. I was such a pathetic coward.
- COMMENTS
People, teens, do horrible things for a lot of different reasons. Sure a content warning would have helped, so those who are offended don't trespass. Just be careful going forward. If you are going to redeem this kid, don't rush it. Give your readers a reason to care, or at the very least want to see him get better. He has a terrible abusive backstory, so help us to understand why he thought running out on Luc was a good idea. It's your story, so stay true to your creation, but if you have Luc forgive him, we won't all agree but we want to at least have it be plausible. Again, take the time to develop these characters and tell their story.
It's a tough subject matter you've taken on, so follow through. I gave you 4 stars for the effort. Make the next installment worth that 5 star. Best of luck.:)
There is no coming back for Brett! What he did is unforgivable and I hope Luccas never forgives him. He's crazy and deserves to suffer
I really think Brett was honest when he admitted he loved Luc. But when Max and the bullies come in, Brett backtracks to save face. Poor Luc. I think Brett will have to do much to make this up to Luc, if ever he can. Perhaps over time, and maybe Brett going public, will work. I'd like to be enough of an optimist to say I believe it could work out. I'd like to read the rest of the story if you care to pursue this, with a HEA in mind.
Please continue writing the story. I want to know what will happen next.
He sure is a coward. Looking forward to see if he can change.