All Comments on 'Patience Pt. 04'

Good chapter!

5

The misdirection on both parts is starting to get annoying - 4*

This guy is pretty dense.

This has passed slow burn by and become no burn. But I'm not a quitter, so onwards to the next chapter. 4/5

Still enjoying the story but the spelling and grammatical errors are very distracting. Was this even edited at all? Love the slow burn. Some people think slow burn means 3 or 4 chapters. To me, it means 10 chapters of more. Those are usually the best stories. 4*