- Loving Wives
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by dsoul
- 35 Comments
This writer has migrated to white only domain used to write on a Black dominant story realmn. Nonetheless the plost are all the same and sterile.
but first pull the dildo out your ass you gay fucker
You sorry asshole of an author. How about going to Iran where they will appreciate you skills and reward you accordingly.
but you only need one bullet for yourself just put it in your mouth and point to the top of your head and get this over with.
. . . characterise as written. There are several elements that some readers won't care for in this short story, the IR aspect, the bi-sexual aspect, and just the wife with a lover aspect that so many readers here seem to love to rant about. Those are legitimate dislikes for some guys. What I don't see is the anonymous responder who begins with the headline of humiliation. The only single scene where humiliation of husband might come into play is when wife is riding hubby after dancing with a stranger at the company party. It was clear to me reading that author intended both principles to take that as humor within the context of the story. Other than that everything about the relationship between husband and wife was straightforward, open and agreed upon. Even the meeting with the black stud, including the bi-sexuality, was a completely mutual event.
If you don't like the story say so, but don't make the story into something it isn't.
I think that this would be better placed in the IR category. It would find greater audience appeal there. A warning on the bi part would keep some of the negative readers away. You used pretty much all of the elements required for ugly comment posts. I didn't like the subject matter myself but it was written well enough to get me to the end.
Saw the name guessed it's the usual racist fucked up shit and voted 1 star without reading it.
Wrong category and this is just racist crap IR,Gay,Group. Loving wives no 1* I think this author writes and posts this garbage on purpose Moron
read the way you want it to read. bobnbobbi comment is so full of shit it reeks they take this racist words and use them to suit their sicko life style, he's a racist and they are idiots case closed.
Post this in the proper category.
There's no Stupid Dumb Ass Husband category so post it in FETISH.
...though the plot was not a surprise. Why bother?
I knew it was nigger garbage and not worth reading. This fucking jungle bunny continues to put out racist tripe at an alarming rate. Don't they hang niggers where he lives? If not they need to. Fucking coon.
it is a shame that the BOYS can't get it up without a fair skin . i have noted of late on my last trip to Vegas that most of the BOYS had utter pigs/slugs on their arms.. i must admit that i do not care for mixing of races but friends are fine.i guess my question is from the BOYS with so many foxy dark women out there why ? i guess you are not a MaN after all it takes more than a dick to be a man .
Why does DSoul need to repeatedly portray Caucasians as pencil-dick wimps who cannot satisfy Sweetie but The Black Bull CAN, almost automatically? It suggests to me that DSoul is a Black Dude with a 3 1/2 inch (and thin) peepee! Else why this persistent theme? Don't regale him, pray he finds self-acceptance!
Story, however, sucks, so 2*
When are they going to start allowing us to give negative votes. Giving a 1 star is too much of a compliment.
then think dumb assed writer calls me a fag, have you read what you wrote shit for brains. The only fag her is you d "I like cock" soul. Just another queer with a keyboard, does your slutty ass wife know your gay?
your stories are weaker by the submission. but, whatever dude, you can have all the fat white ho's you can con.
your english is pretty good for a guy from nigeria, bullshit buddy.
Isn't it strange how most of the commentators are anonymous and all are not authors themselves. Obviously jealousy is the main reason for the negative comments. Switch on the Anonymous comments filter; ignore the jealous brigade and continue to write your entertaining and erotic stories.
stupid cunt gives five stars for a face full of nigga jizz
Sort of wish that the stud had bred the wife's pussy and cuckold sucked his cock clean. Then ate her creampie. But that might be the next chapter. Love a cuckold that gets involved sucking cock, licking balls, etc. Some even let studs fuck their cuckold pussy's. Stretching them, fucking them, and getting bred just like the slut wife.
When I read in a story things like: "this group of black guys who belong to some sort of club, and they call themselves the Tongue Patrol gang", I know that the story will have smal or big hints in racism and superiority races... And in the end was exactly that...The couple surrendered to the superior black race...It would be racism if the races were the inverse...
Nice story would have liked you to continue on to the next phase with Alice being filmed by her husband and Alice having more than just one member of the TP round to service her.
My wife loves to tell me she has had sex after I'm eating her out I love that bitch more and more. She has held out sexually until I've suck a friends cock for her. This makes her super horny. She doesn't know she is making my fantasies come true. I can suck cock all day long. I don't like men, I know I love to suck cock and swallow their cum!
I love reading these stories. I’m a middle age white women married of 9 yrs. my husband is a great man. But he hasn’t touched me in over a year. I’m 5’4” have DD46 tits. But I am over weight for my size and cute but not pretty. I work for a manufacturing company. I have always wear low cut blouses to work. I have to deal with the two guys in the warehouse a lot to see that they got my orders out and on time. For the last year they have alway made rude commits about me and smart ass remarks about my tits and they are alway grabbing their crotch in front of me. Which I always ignore but it all turned me on and got me wet. Is Because no one would be interested in me I thought. And they are several years younger then me to. Just young cocky and arrogant kids they are black and both have lots of tattoos. Both very muscular.. in January in was in their office because they made a bad mistake. We got in a little argument. And one of Them smacked me in the ass. Me being in shock and not saying anything he did it again saying you like it don’t you bitch. I started to storm out put. The other stopped me. Before I knew it they had their hands all over me and my tits out sucking them. I couldn’t stop them I was so horny i actually want it and it wasn’t long they Had me on my knees forcing me to suck their cocks and calling me whore And telling me they where going to fuck my big ass. I’ve never been treated or talked to. like that before but I was to scared of them to stop it. Will now it being February. It’s all changed now they fuck me often while talking dirty to me and calling. Me names. I really love my new sex life. I’ll do anything to keep it.