All Comments on 'Quaranteam: Mike's Hurdles Ch. 04'
by lokisluckwriting
- 22 Comments
Like the crossover references to quaranteam:off the grid looking forward to the next one
Aaaaaaauuuugggghhhh!!!! First love the story and the teen angst. You have mastered the art of giving just the right blend of of sex and story and now a cliff hanger!!! I love and hate the cliff hanger, that's why the scream of frustration at the beginning of my comments. Please post more soon!
Great story. Keep writing. The characters are more realistic than some of the other stories I've read in this DH world.
That one more to add to the list of classic cliffhanger. Not 'there was the sound of gunfire and his world went black.' Or someone is actually hanging off a cliff. But mom says 'we need to talk'. Now that's a heart stopper!!!!!
Welcome back! Life does tend to get in the way, doesn't it? Thank you for this newest chapter. I look forward to.your continued submissions.
First line next chapter:
Mom: "It's about your latest girl. Son, you're going to have to gag her, her yelling scared the base."
Seriously, this is great and I can't wait to see how the multi-person scenes turn out.
Great chapter, and I didn't mind waiting. I like your version of Quaranteam. It includes younger, in some cases less experienced characters. It doesn't adopt the Deus ex Machina that the Quaranteam serum sort of magically makes everyone get along. It's a good approach.
Great addition to the quaranteam universe. Delightful to have a clueless virginal scared lead make trying to do d his way. Perfect cliffhanger end to this chapter, leaving us Quaranteam addict thrusting. For the next chapter.
A cast list is sure handy when you bring someone like Nathan back in. I ended up going back to the first chapter when I encountered him.
Youthful, but without the stereotypical teenage angst where the young people are constantly over-reacting to trvial and immaterial concerns. Survivor's guilt is bothering him, as is natural, but it is not taking over his persona. Mike is demonstrating that he is stronger than he knows, while allowing himself to be vulnerable. Acepting Nathan's offer of support without rejecting help due to some misguided bravura is a sign of innate wisdom. Also, about an hour of good reading is so much more satisfying. Please continue!!!!!
Yep, it's a great story. Interesting partners. Seems like Mike is not that highly sexed. When I was a young man, I did the traveling carnival for a season. There was a young woman who joined that said she could handle any six of us. Two was more than she could handle.
I just read the foreword to the story and wanted to comment. If you look, you are averaging a chapter a month. That's a decent average. Sure, when you are a reader like me, it's sometimes hard to wait. But it's lots better than waiting 2 months and then another two months for the chapter after that. And your chapters are very interesting.
We have been getting some VERY interesting stories lately. But yours ranks high on my scale. There are so many styles. I admit to really liking the one set in Russia. But then yours is very youthful for contrast.
Great to see another installment for Mike and family! I really like how this spin off and others have started to hammer home just how devastating the death toll is on the survivors.
I really like that you and several of the other QTeam authors are addressing the mental health aspect of this world. Despite the whole "teenager fantasy" aspect of the QTeam vaccine, it is a lot of pressure to put on the men in these stories. Having so many people depending on them to stay healthy and safe is a lot of pressure, even before adding in the emotional attachments that they have developed for the women around them. Bad enough for some more mature guys from the other stories, but especially overwhelming for a kid still in his teens. Please keep up the great work.
Thanks for another entertaining chapter! Leaving us wanting more with the call from Mikes mom. Love it!
Love the addition of the Only Fans girl with a mysterious past that includes a past boyfriend who is rotting in prison and probably already dead, unless he broke out before Duo Halo or was in the 5% of men who could survive Duo Halo. Remember the death rates among prisoners from COVID was high in 2020, so it would be catastrophic if a virus like Duo Halo had hit the prison.
Would love for Sandy to have spent time as a stripper and an prostitute, while she dated the creep. Maybe even having done some porn at some point as an extra in a sex orgy during her time with the creep. Then she could bring her sexual experience to Mike's little family.
Welcome back. It did feel like the whole QT world went away. Great addition. Keep it up.and as always, Stay safe.