by LasciviaDelicioso
I look forward to reading more of her adventures!
You are a really talented writer and I very much enjoyed reading this story. I seriously hope you continue this storyline. Do you have other stories that you feel you can publish?
One of the best stories I have read on here for a long time.
Very much looking forward to part 2 :)
I loved this, soo erotic. The way you wrote the relationship dynamic between Anna and Sara was amazing I am really looking forward to reading the next part . Thank you
I am sure that we are all very much looking forward to any future contributions!
This is the first ENF story I've read, and I think I might have to find some more. I'm really looking forward to the sequel!
Honestly one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. Welcome and keep it up.
Really erotic writing. I wonder if Anna will get pleasured - I mean physically.....ha ha XXX
Well crafted and so erotic. Can't wait for more.
L O R
Like other commenters, What is ENF
"Oh, I'm just an aspiring exhibitionist heading for a nude beach (here's the address) who needs a firm hand to guide me...*and so is my friend*."
That is what we call in the business "foreshadowing" 😜
It's a thing, okay? Google it! ;)
OMG!. I don't usually enjoy ENF stories as they often come across as generic and boring after a while. Well you definitely blew that idea out the water! This was one of the the most erotic, sensual and unique stories I have ever read on this site. The gradual build, the consentual non-consent, the "mistress" in charge..... I cant wait to see where you take this next.
Well done!
CC
There is not enough good consensual ENF stories in the world. We are very lucky to get a new one of this quality. The story is captivating from the start and throughout I felt with Sara while taking the sadistical enjoyment of Anna's controlled cruelty. It would be a crime not to continue this story! Also, from reading your biography I kinda got hyped for some ticklish action too in the sequels! Please?
Hi,
I saw your post asking to go here and read your new story. I read the whole thing when I got home and went to my room. I liked it. How you wrote so well what the girl was feeling, and her thoughts being around that older woman. It made me wonder many things. About girls, and older women, and sleeping nude and being so close to orgasm.
I hope you read this comment. I like you, your writing.
candy
I'm glad you liked the story, sweetie. I was certainly thinking of you when I wrote parts of it. I wish you had stayed in touch on bdsmlr, because I enjoyed training you. And I think you'd agree you have a lot more to learn from me.
Click "Send Feedback" to send me a private message to my email, and let me know an email where I can reach you, and teach you.
Hi Mistress,
Yes I read what you posted here. It made me blush. I..I’m so surprised you were thinking of me when you wrote certain parts of your awesome story. And yeah, umm, I also remember how you were training me.... your words, your style, things like that...
I really appreciate how you want me to reach out to you, and how you want to teach me special things. I’m nodding because I agree that there are many things a girl like me needs to know and I agree you are a woman who can teach me. You would be so good at teaching a girl like me what I need to know, what I need to be doing, what my place is, what my role is, and exactly where I belong.
candy
This is a thing. I didn't know this was a thing. My brain is filled with shame yet my cock is filled with the gerbil's worth of blood. I'm confused.
Thanks for being my introduction into this fetish, I guess?
-7s
This unique air travel & beach adventure grabbed me immediately. I have many ideas about where the story goes from here but will keep to myself. I am sure the author will continue to surprise!
i feel like such a lesbian right now. i’m wet and ready to risk it all on an airplane after reading this so, um, thanks i guess?
Ohhh, I came 4 times imaging I was Sara at your hands
What a great premise for an emerging exhibitionist! And then... she gets a surprise assist... you kept me engaged and anticipating what next steps she might need to face. Thanks for a fun flight of fantasy!
This is an amazing story. I loved the humiliation and submission. I am masturbating to the thought that I am Sara.
great story i will have followed you so it message me when you post other parts, please dont stop it can go so many ways
Fantastic reluctance story. Does a great job of depicting someone who doesn't jump feet first into their predicament, but rather, slowly loses a battle and then eventually accepts their new condition. Part of me suspects that the sequel won't be nearly as good though, since the biggest draw of these stories is the resolution of the inner conflict. Once the reluctance has mostly ended and the the girl has accepted her new identity as an exhibitionist/slut, it loses this element of the story.
Wow, what a hot storie, very well written. Love it and cant wait to read the next part
not a genre I usually delve into, but this particularly hot...that author a domme quickly apparent, a cougar, with sadistic bent-pulling her body up out of her seat by her clit-?!?- that enjoys having her kitten an enf-particularly like form she's given kitten-slim, modest breasts and neatly trimmed muffin-we have similar tastes in that regard
...and now going to entrap her friend too...curious how she's going to pull that off
easy 5 and fave...just wish author had given more of her faves than just two of her own stories
Superlative!! Author accurately and completely captures the exhibitionist's desires, excitement and needs. Lived with a similar woman for years. We enjoyed many similar games with her displayed "accidentally" and deliberately, especially when traveling far from home where no one was likely to recognize her. Definitely will be reading the next stories!!
Kept me riveted. I enjoyed this story, totally. Well told, kept the focus.
I can totally see this happening (to me)
I've never been enthralled with an erotic story like I was with this one. I'm almost exclusively a tickling person, but this story opened my eyes to ENF and exhibition, and I don't think it'll be my last time reading stories with these themes. The way you built tension here and made this story so believable is really impressive, I know I will be reading this one again and again.
Stayed up late to binge all 3 chapters, stayed with me for days... Thank you
-Avery
I genuinely cannot believe how much I enjoyed this story. Not the type of story I'd normally search for, needed to Google what ENF was at the start, but probably one of the funnest stories to read in a long time. I enjoyed the mutual benefit of the dynamic, based on a series of small decisions, that never felt forced or predatory. Very excited to see where this goes, curious if my interpretation of some of the foreshadowing at the end turns out to be correct.
Amazing sexy hot naked adventure. Truly inspiring and erotic. I'm going to keep reading.
really really really enjoyed it, ready for part 2
such a well written sexy and hot story
anna sounds like a perfect mistress and i really related with sara