by lexstroker
I'm liking this first chapter very much and I look forward to the next one.
I really enjoyed this story, wonder if they will keep the house I guess we will see
A great read and found the character definition well presented. Look forward to the next chapter.
I really like how you started this story off! Thank you!
Thanks for all of the positive comments on my first story! I have been working on the second part of the story and hope to have it out soon. I’m not sure if there will be a third part, and if there isn’t, I’ll definitely give closure in the second part. I hate when stories leave me hanging!
I love the detail in your writing. The mixture of emotions,the slow build up. Each of your stories allows the reader to feel they are sharing the experience.
Very well done. Loved the background stories that let you know the characters. Love the details of the project.
And hey, who doesn't love a hot chick cumming from oral, or another hot chick giving it!
So glad there's another chapter ;->
This started well. But then you reveal Natalie is a cheater. Instant splash of cold water. I realize which category this story is in, maybe that explains the non-chalance towards it, since it's only a husband that's been cheated on. For someone who had been unfairly treated despite not cheating, Allison sure doesn't hesitate when it comes to jumping into bed with one.