by markydaysaid
Holey cow. I need to soak in a whirlpool filled with Purell.
That was some nasty wanking sh*t. Awesome.
But I hope that the two aren't done with each other yet! They were made for each other, and even though she's broken him, I don't think she'll ever has as much fun breaking anybody else has she has him, so she'll wanna keep him around!
I'd love to see a sequel, one featuring Daisy and quite possibly her son, Mark. I bet Mark can't even take half of what Enrique did *winks sinisterly*
Very descriptive, very violent, and very nasty. As always, FANTASTIC writing!
THAT WAS FUCKING SO............HOT........I CAME IN MY GEANS 3 OR4 TIMES. i,m gonigto have alot of dreams about that one!!!!
I just didn't believe that she could dominate a young guy physically. Everything after that was unbelievable.
So good. So hot and well written. Dying to hear more about what this Goddess did to Mrs Cummings/her son and all her other victims… including her (hopefully soon to be) newest one.
That what this was rape. She chloroformed him and had her way with him against his will. If she seduced him into it that was one thing but I gotta be honest with this just seemed demented. I, as a guy who would love have a woman above her strap-on up his ass, would never fantasize about a woman like this she is pure evil. I love to see this demonic vixen get her just desserts. See how she likes being taken violently against her will.
A fillet knife. Which was what he did to her. Slowly and extremely painfully. She last almost 4 hours as he peeled her skin, cut off fingers and toes, followed by her clit and her breasts. She finally bled to death.
He brought his parents back. And they brought the Police with them. No one was happy. She spent years and years and finally died in jail.
Seems most of the complaints are whining. :-(
"I just didn't believe that she could dominate a young guy physically." It's established she's taller than him so she has leverage and reach, and works out and trains in martial arts. Seems perfectly believable to me.
Sure, what she did was rape, but one has to remember he's done his fair share of rape, including his very first time. In fact he pretty much boasts every time he's had sex he's taken it further than the other person wanted to go - so given he's getting a taste of his own medicine, I don't really have a problem with it given he forced his way into her house after not even attempting to apologise for breaking her window - does that count as breaking & entering? In large chunks of the US she'd get off anything legal by claiming she panicked and over-reacted in self defense to a home invasion.
Oh well, can't please everyone. I liked it. Thanks!
Loved the story; Jealous of Enrique. Wish i could meet a Samantha and be taken by her and broken to be her permant slave sex toy toy abuse!
I would love another part where she has to dominate the girl also because she fights back or one about her fucking get daughter in the room as a punishment
Rather extreme and rapey. Some of the people she hurt didn't deserve it for sure. I hope she ends up being on the receiving end of being tortured as well.
You need to make a whole story of this. I like the protagonist. Oh, and make one of her and her son. I'd love to see this dom breaking him in- turning him into a 'real man'.