by DaniW
This was quite good, especiallyas its your first submission. The chsracters are intetesting and thecsex was really good. Extraordinary in fact. You had me wet with my pussy clenching and I so wished I could have been Patricia. (Actually, I wanted to be Darah too.)
I hope you continue tthis story. I'dlove to see whete you take it. It wwasn'ta brilliant puece of wriring but WTF, for being your first story you get 5 stars from me.
Looking forward to the "talk tomorrow" continuation. Five stars!
Thanks for the kind words. There is more to the story, hopefully coming soon.