by Daphne123
I tried to write a comment, realised it said more than I wanted to in a quasi public forum so I submitted it as Feedback.
So yeah....most of me is confused and weirded out because I did find this story to be sexy.
Tess (UK)
I guess what we have here is a new take on the horrific cry of frat boys of yesteryear that No means Yes. Daphne, you have a twisted mind. It's a good thing I happen to like twisted minds. I do wonder, though: while they were having fun "raping" Sara, why didn't they have a go with Angie? ~~ JB Edwards
Fabulous Daphne! This entire series was fantastic! Your stories (both short ones and the longer series) are some of the best I've ever read here. Looking forward to whatever sexy ideas you have in that naughty mind of yours. Easily 5 stars!!!
Well thanks everyone that enjoyed it and sent nice comments. If you didn't enjoy it, sorry, but I did my best.
Tess - I appreciate the private comments. Thanks for that. I do agree that this should NEVER happen in real life. As I've stated at the beginning of every chapter, this is 100% fiction. Even in the story I tried to make it clear that Sara is "consenting" to having "non-consentual" encounters. My overall point was to address how blurred that line can be sometimes. If you both enjoyed it AND felt slightly uncomfortable for enjoying it, then you got the point. :) Remember though, it's just a story.
JB Edwards - I considered Angie getting in on the action but I wanted the story to be more about Sara's journey, and have Angie serve as a "guardian" to help Sara discover what she really wanted (besides, Angie had to hold Sara down). :)
Love to all.
Daphne
I said before that I prefer your first-person POV stories, which I think are your best work, and then you go and prove me wrong. Great story!
Thank you for the naughty-but-fun story. I hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it.
Hey!
That was a deserving end to the saga i must say. . Thanks for all the effort you put into this. I must say a very satisfying end.
Can't wait for the next. :)
Thanks
Awwww you all are the best. :)
ListbethMichelle
horsefeathers
DanDelaware
MrObnoxious
greens444
JBEdwards
Tess
If you have any particular kink you would like me to write about in future, let me know.
xoxo - Daphne
I have enjoyed and have jerked off to all your stories but these chapters are especially thrilling. The way you are able to weave rape into a narrative and lead character in a way that is convincing yet completely erotic and arousing and wonderful is incredible. Thank you, and everyone remember--no actual girls were harmed creating this amazing tale.
this was incredible! as i said after probably every chapter of this story, this is one of my favorite stories of yours (and on this site in general). it had so many elements i love (non consent, many female orgasms, lesbian couple, squirting, object insertion, etc etc etc), and it remained amazing with every chapter (my favorites were parts 2, 5 and 7). this was amazing and so so hot, i'll be revisiting this over and over again. keep up the good work! x
Well, I'd like to thank the three anonymous voters that completely tanked this chapter's rating with one star votes (and without giving any constructive comments to justify such a mean tactic). I don't understand how someone can get all the way to the end of an extremely popular seven part series and then be so mean as to hate on it with no justification. You are exactly the type of reader that makes me not want to write anything else. My work is good, really good, and your cruel actions are a reflection on you, not me. If this is how my VERY personal stories are going to be treated, I'm going to have to reconsider whether the massive amount of work I put in to these submissions is worth it.
For those of you who appreciate and have said some VERY lovely things about my work, thank you. You are the people who make me want to write, and my hugs and kisses are for you. xoxo Daphne
This is one of the best series I’ve read here. It was both super hot and an interesting story. I absolutely loved it.
Daphne don’t let negative people get you down. Keep up the great work please.💕💕
Never read the word rape in a story without it being a total buzzkill, and giving everything a dirty feeling. Somehow you created a story where that is not true.
I'd have given this 5 stars if I could. Don't let the haters get to you, as always you are a master of intense and very hot fantasies. This chapter, and story, was very well done, and you should be proud of yourself! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Thanks Sweetie! I'm working on two new stories currently. One is a single part, the other will be a series. I have a feeling you'll love them both. - xoxo Daphne
Daphne - I haven't made it through this story, but, from the other ones I've read that you've written, yours are among the hottest and best written that I've found on this site, and I appreciate you posting them. Despite the discouraging bs of some drive by vandals, I hope you continue to write and share your stories.
This story was awesome! I am subbing and can’t wait to read your next story!
Wanted to give you 10 stars but they didn’t appear at the end of the chapters as usual. Great writing!!
This has quickly become my favorite series. It was brilliant, enticing, creative, original and just everything I’ve ever wanted in a story.
Thank you very much for all the hard work you put into this story!
I’ve never wanted to be someone so much as I have Sara. Thanks for that intense ride!