All Comments on 'Scenes from an Affair'
by Onvisy
- 17 Comments
Confusing plot, but more than anything, the ‘writing style,’ if it even deserves that description is just bizarre and either a result of illiteracy or simple laziness. It is a weirdly-formatted outline for a story you meant to write, but just couldn’t be bothered?
This was the hardest thing I have ever read on this site in over 25 years...
I know you think all these detractors just don't get you. You believe you're misunderstood and under appreciated.
You are not. You are completely inadequate with the English Langford and I suggest you return to grade school so you can improve your life by learning how to communicate.
That was hard work. I don't like your writing style though the story certainly has potential.
I don't often comment, but don't listen to the negative feedback. You have a unique storytelling style that clearly puts some people off, but I found it to be an enjoyable journey, somewhat dreamlike, through the events.
/ know you think all these detractors just don't get you. You believe you're misunderstood and under appreciated./>
No, I think they get me perfectly well and have understood the story just fine. They're just not the audience for this work. Some of them are, it's to be admitted, prone to using very insulting language in their critiques (you for example) but, I guess I am just not the audience for their style of criticism!
I did almost submit this as poetry instead of prose and possibly should have.
There's actually one really huge error in the story as published, a bit I had meant to completely delete which throws off the "timeline" completely, I am working on resubmitting the correct version. I don't know much about how the site works so I'm not sure if that will replace this story or will have to be a whole new story and this one deleted.
The more I read, the more I enjoyed. Like being drawn into a delicious, sensuous dream. Well done.