by whoamireally
Well told assembly of kinks, loved the reveal at the end! ;-)
Thanks for sharing here. Keep on writing, whatever genre you choose. You tell a good story, keeping the reader involved all the way.
Premise with real potential.
But the sex was rushed.
Too much "Yes, ma'am" and "No, ma'am". Not enough details about the sex.
Three stars.
Well written, engaging story. Seemed completely plausible and fun. Thanks and looking forward to part 2.
Well, poor William is going to be outed and humiliated a lot more now that his lovely wife has used him with a friend instead of a stranger. Love the creative twist at the end.
Interesting premise.
But all too one-sided.
He does things to women, but they do nothing to/for him. Not even some teasing. Not even some playing with his balls. Not even telling him what they'd do to/with him if he weren't wearing his cock cage. Would he like that? When was the last time he's been allowed to cum? When was the last time he'd had a blowjob? Had his cock on a pussy? Had a titty fuck?
Four stars.
Enjoyable and surprising
I loved the story and the surprise. It's a great fantasy idea. Thanks for writing it!