All Comments on 'Single Mom to BBC Slut Ch. 01'
by amenarimix
- 25 Comments
great start. can't wait to see him have mom and daughter at the same time. also for daughter to control mom. using her to clean her pussy after Tyron uses her. pappasleaze!
Super - can’t wait till mom is knocked up & maybe daughter all at the same time
Really nice to hear mother and daughter loving the same cock. I see a threesome in their future. Keep it coming!!
I hope English is your second language because the grammatical errors make this too hard to read. Please get an editor.
Great idea for a story, but you do need someone to help you edit your stories as the English, grammar and composition needs alot of work. Reach out to me if you want the help.
I hope you'll continue your version of story. No disrespect for the comments but would like to see you how you would develop from here
N o disrespect for the comments but really would like to see your version and how you will develop from here
Agree with below comments....very nice and hot. But, your English and grammar needs a bit of work. Nice job, though...keep writing.
just wish the author would this story "MY WIFE'S GF BRING HER BLACK BF CH. 02", first..
You need to explain his orgasm better in real time rather than just telling us it happened
I liked it. I'd like a little more detail on the deepthroat part but that's just me. Looking forward to more hopefully.
I'm shock Tyrone was surprised with mom oral skills... fruit don't fall far from the tree!!!!!
I truly like the concept of white mother/daughter sharing the same BBC.
I also agree your story would be much better with an editor to smooth over some very rough edges. But please do not stop writing, your mind is exactly where it needs to be.
Good story but could use an editor. Loved how mom discovered the joys of going black like her daughter. It would be nice to see Mom becoming pregnant.
Awesome story, my ideas: Daughter becomes more forceful and dom mom, mom get shared with other black guys and Black Women, maybe daughter whores out mom to other friends.
Your ideas are good, I liked this story. You will get much higher ratings if you get an editor, who can fix your grammar, and polish up the language. I understand that English is not your first language, the errors are not your fault, and it is easily remedied with an editor.
I concur with the previous comment. You do need to get the spelling and grammar right, because it does make a big difference to how a story reads and unfolds! If the spelling and grammar is bad, it really does detract from what you are trying to achieve.
Another married white slut turned out by her own daughter into a black cock addicted breeding whore.
Next up, mom's first black cock reparations gangbang tag team with her slutty daughter.