by MSTarot
Silly title, sorry, but it says it all - good story, well written. No sex, so probably not good enough to win, but definitely good enough to read and share. Thank you.
As an ex pro Guitar Player , This story Ticks all the boxes for me . So Atmospheric , and the kick in the last paragraph was genius , never saw that coming ! Loved it !
Initially was worried that an older style like this would be a tough read, but glad I kept at it. The story was one of the more original that I have read recently, and worth all 5* I can give. Thanks for sharing!
with a twist.
To call it a period piece is insufficient. Noir would be more accurate. Nicely done MSTarot, nicely done.
I love that song. Diana Krall does a great cover. Good to read you again.