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Click here"Oh baby, oh that feels so good, I feel so full," you purr with satisfaction "so good, I am fucked completely," you laugh gently.
Moving back, I pull my still semi hard cock out, your pussy lips are red and swollen, and I can see the cum start to drip. Well actually it was pouring from your pussy and onto the ground. Your fingers reach underneath and into your throbbing pussy "oh baby, so much cum for me, I love how much you pumped in me, and twice in one go, impressive." Your soft voice sounds so sexy as you put your fingers in your mouth, licking the cum that was covering them.
I look round, the stranger had vanished, I hadn't even noticed him going. You turn and stand up, cum still dripping from your pussy. You take our hands and push them between your legs, "feel how much you filled me up babe". I can feel the cum dripping out of your pussy, mine and his. You push your cum covered fingers into my mouth, "see how we taste together," you purr, only I know it was more than just us two.
"We need to go," you say as you slip your skirt down. Quickly we head back to the car, the car park vacant, except for a few vehicles, including a blue van, with a guy stood next to it in white shorts, smiling and smoking a cigarette.
"Hey, look over there, is that the guy we gave a show too earlier," you ask, unsure if it was him.
"Yes, it looks like him," I respond, offering no other insight.
He sees us and waves. You wave back.
"Seems like a nice guy," you say, "bet he is horny, hope he gets to fuck tonight, little bit of a shame he didn't get here earlier, he could have watched us." You laugh quietly and wink at me.
"Would you not have been embarrassed with someone watching us?" I ask.
"Hey babe, I was that turned on he could have fucked me over that table in the woods."
"What, really?" I respond, acting surprised.
Smiling you say, "well maybe not, but who knows, would be a good fantasy to have though!"
- COMMENTS
Atrociously written, with pov switching between characters on every sentence or two! Very difficult to read.
This makes no sense. Why would he do nothing as another man fucks his wife? Why is that guy not dead, or at least injured in such a way to guarantee he would never have sex again? What kind of voyeuristic, disease craving creep is the MC?
Obviously I neglected to have the strangers pov too.. A nice switch to his feelings entering her
nothing gets me hotter than having the wife let me help her flash a truck driver on the road when safe even got her hot like this sexy lady and she pulled her panties off while a driver was watching. she got a toot of his horn that time.
I really enjoyed your story. And let's face it, had she looked up and saw the fellow standing there, she would have gladly let him do what he did anyway. Not only that, but I'd say there's a good chance she knew it wasn't you when he was doing it. Keep up the good work!
- Bravo!! Your could not have been said more eloquently in any words.
- women are NOT ours to be shared. Pleasure for both partners is THEIRS to share between each other, with each other. In the case of Roni and I, it was through a both a LOT of communication AND trust.
- you have handled all of your responses with maturity. Bravo!
Most certainly not, but in the story there are a few indicators that she was open to this..."Hey babe, I was that turned on he could have fucked me over that table in the woods." being the main one.
So as I was writing I had her as fully consensual, and it actually arose out of a real conversation with my partner....but I do not think women, or men for that matter, are the property of anyone else, except in a story, where the characters belong to the author I suppose :)
Is it really your opinion that women are ours to be shared? Does the wife have no say in this?
I enjoyed your story it was very hot, and well wrote. My wife and I had a very close experience as you, only het was an older guy well hung. Being over horny my wife asked him to join us. Him and I took turns fucking her in the Woods all afternoon.
I was going to comment on problems with 2nd person, but others have it covered. ReedRichards, javmor79 , and a few others have done a good job with the comments. I rarely disagree with javmore79, but in this case I have a different perspective on the Anon Trolls who haunt these pages.
Not being a person who suffers fools lightly, I solved the problem by disabling anonymous comments, and have been satisfied I didn’t miss out on but few helpful comments. I did a little research on random stories, (not scientific by any means) and discovered about 80% of anon comments are pure bile. Personally I think this site should follow the example of some others, and require an ID for both voting and commenting. They allow you to read for free.
In the spirit of full disclosure, the stories on the two sites I stumbled upon requiring that, do not compare favorably with Literotica, but it ain’t the Anonymous comment that accounts for it.
You show talent, so keep writing. Study stories by javmore79 and ReedRichards, JustPlainBob and others who score above 3.5. I would say above 4, but given the effort mounted by the Anons, you won’t see many of those here on LW.
Good Luck. cd
"Why do negative commentators struggle so much with spelling and grammar?"
If they have time to proofread and then retype their comments, and then it makes them review it... just imagine an actual conversation. One would need a spittle shield and a translation App.