by Tabby18lover
Another very good story. Please write more like this. I loved it.Certainly made me orgasm.
Thanks
Jill
I really liked it! Can't wait for her to get it relentlessly and up the ass!
great story . would love to find out what would happen if her mom walked in and caught them fucking.
damnn....that story got me allll wet...im literally about to orgasm. great story!!
sweet tabby what a lovely story you have shared ....Can only hope you let us have way more maybe even write one for me $bill will be looking and I know I have one for you .....Maybe could even write one together just me hoping but yes loved it keep it up
I have noticed in all the stories of yours that I have read you make a lot of grammatical errors.... The stories are decent but I remember you spelt 'pulled' as 'puled', easy word. That doesn't make any sense. You keep changing the storylines for some reason. First Cliff is your brother and now he's your step father? Diane is not only your mom but now she's your auntie and your sister? Some of your sentences don't make sense.. Try re - writing them, they will be much better.
MMMM theres nothing like a hot wet tight little 18yr olds pussy to use. The way he turned her into his slut was so natural, so hot. She will submit to him now she needs his cock.
A few typos here and there...okay, more than a few. But the sex was just what the title of this comment says. Write more, but give the stories the care your writing deserves.