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Click here"Real life is way overrated. Ever been to Bermuda? I've always wanted to go there." Jenna smiled when soft wisps of blonde hair slapped her nose.
"What?" Drew was stunned, she was positive they would only have the night, and was already planning on making the most of it, but Jenna seemed to have other plans.
"I think 30 years are enough to have life dictated to you by others, don't you?" Jenna raised a questioning brow.
A slow smile spread across Drew's lips. Maybe the Fates had something different in store for her after all. "I can't believe you're for real," she whispered in astonishment.
"I couldn't believe it either until I felt you in my arms. To tell you the truth, part of me still doesn't believe it." She paused for a moment before continuing, "You take my breath away."
Drew swallowed her emotions and let a sensual smile curl her lips, "Shall we try to give new meanings to that line, my love?"
Jenna licked her lips in anticipation, "It would be my pleasure."
The future looked bright indeed and the past just didn't seem so gloomy anymore. Getting older sure had its benefits.
The End
- COMMENTS
Tightly written beautiful story. this is why i read Lesbian love stories.
Thanks, ever so.
Great story! I've read it a few times now, and it still gives me feels. Thanks for sharing it with us.
The only part that wasn't either intense or quickly-paced was the intro, and that made sense to me. The intro was slower. It had her friends preparing to help her celebrate. The intro hinted at what her life was like before she collided with her soul mate. It created dramatic contrast to the intensity of the rest of the story. Was it hot? Yep. Are all the questions answered, all the details worked out and everything resolved? Of course not, its a quickie. Nicely done.
You kind of rushed through this one. Didn't really get a chance to get to know the characters. It has a ton of potential and room for development.. please write another chapter.
If I am honest this story just really confused me. I don't know what ok earth happened it moved on too quickly and didn't make sence. I'm sorry I'm normally a huge fan of your work but this story just didn't do it for me sorry. If you want any mote comments please e-mail me at thanks xx