All Comments on 'Taking Turns In The Backseat'
by Likes Watching
- 8 Comments
Maybe it is time for all writers of
this subject matter to never again
allow feedback on their stories?
One new author did just that in a
story I read last evening. Incest
stories and Romantic ones are but
two of the areas I never read.
And, unlike some people, I do not
feel the need to post assinine
comments just because I do not
like the topics. Please keep
writing, Likes Watching.
yours is terrific. Beyond that, it is believable in all respects.
It might be worthwhile to do a story on Larry's later life. -5- points
Mmmm, grear! I love slutty aggressive girls, and McKenzie is a girl I wish I had married.
Wow, very erotic writing. A fantasy a lot of us married men have. Sharing our wife and watching her take a hard cock deep in her mouth & pussy. Your stories are well written, however, you need an editor. There are many errors and omissions that detract from the scenario you are creating. 4-😊’s would have been 5 had there not been so many mistakes. I still loved it !!😊