All Comments on 'Teacher Undressed Ch. 08'
by StoryTeller07
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Quite a variety in this chapter not sure which I like best, of the latest Ch.07 was good.
Heading towards Daisy pulling, mind Sunflower have more petals.
Your reference to Daisy and Sunflowers, is this from Buddhist teaching? Or a poem? Would like to know . . .
Mind Sunflower - hypnotic influence of the sunflower pattern. Pulling Daisies - asking questions on a date, or, thank god its Friday! Interesting, I'll use the phrases in a story.
Not many authors go to the trouble of pointing out the difficulties of being in a powerful situation. The boys are enjoying their position, but trading that off against a bunch of risks.
I can't wait to see how this resolves...
Once again another great story spread out with a great foundation, plot, subplots, interesting characters, surprises, and building "climax".