All Comments on 'The Bookshop Pt. 01'

So many aunts and nephews have feelings they are afraid to act on. The teasing takes a life of it's own.

to a highly eerotic sitshe a shun

Good start, got some good interest in it.

Part two please!!

Please do continue.

young man! Great story! Looking forward to more.

First part - amazing..... Please hurry for the second part

good start

Its better to make a story longer, since most reader expect more. And by cutting it short you just risk very low votes from those who are dissatisfied

I love the way you used this chapter to set the story and mood!