All Comments on 'The Competition Ch. 01'
by AlwaysWantsMore
- 23 Comments
It's really handy to be able to walk around with your Vernier caliper
Everyone should do the same.
You took a potentially good story, and ruined it by the humiliation and degradation she did to her husband. This could have been a 4 or even a 5, but instead, I gave you a 2.
Cheating skank slut married to sissy wimp. Why not run off with Jack? He's an asshole and she's a whore who will probably give her idiot husband STD's. Terrible story about an awful woman and a pathetic loser husband.
Typical first story. Loaded with cliche, tropes and of course the cheating wife with guess what? Yes, black men fucking the white wife of a wimpy husband. Puke. 1*
It was nice of her to tell her husband, how he didnt come even close to either of them, before she even started the once a week put down. She isnt wife material and self absorbed, only her needs matter. He needs to get out of the marriage now before he gets a bad infection from her and her needs. He wont be able to feel her pussy as it gets stretched over time well. He is a wimp already and it can only get worse. He needs to find a real woman that truly wants a husband not a slave, before its too late.
What a stupid drivel. I laugh my ass of how infantile these idiotic characters are and what a botched pile of crap the plot was. Spare us the effort to read a second chapter, it’s a waste of time and the only positive aspect is your lack of talent.
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What husband is she talking about not the one she married, because he left without saying good bye
Scanning, before reading, I stopped when I saw that paragraph starting with "On Monday Celia arrived at Sergio's condo " that goes on and on and on. Yes, I gave it a 1.,
Not sure why I read this piece — maybe the brevity, maybe the image of the energizer bunny that popped into my head after first few lines — but the closing “to be continued” ruined what appeared to be an intriguing, “laughing out loud” parody on the cuckoldry theme. Come on, a wonderful spoof from start to finish in every detail — only thing missing is Celia actually using a ruler to measure erect penises. You surely had a ball writing this piece, now let it be. Of course, the comments are as entertaining as the piece.
👏👏👏. Classic cuck story. Her husband sounds like a totally emotionally secured man. Who's loves to watch his wife get down and dirty with duh boys. Why this story is not 5 stars is beyond me. I think you were sabotaged by Incells. Individuals who refer to cisgender women, as bonus hole birthing person. These dastardly devils, want to force the hungry vaginas of married women, to chow down on the same boring meal night after night.
Can't wait to read the next one.
What a pathetic stupid and very dumb story. What is with you writers who apparently think a cumdump wife is somehow erotic and sexy. Only a man with his balls cut off would like a cumdump cunt like this for a wife.
What a couple of muscle headed testosterone filled idiots whom have nothing but egotistical fueled contests to determine the big beefcake of the block . And the size queen slutty wife whom humiliated her wimpy cum eating cuckold husband whom she obviously has no respect or love for . He needs to spike her protein drinks with arsenic and sleeping tablets !
More feministic writing since obviously this one empowers the wife to be a complete and wanton whore. To ensure we complete the project, the husband is a weak, worthless and demented fool. I guess the anonymous reply that indicates anyone who doesn’t like this sick and demented lifestyle is an incel. On top of that we like cisgender women. Guess you must feel the need to strike out when someone calls out your sad and awful nonsense.
Finish the damn thing before you publish it you can't get to the good part and then continue it for what however long finish the damn thing before you put it on Literotica or at least get more than one chapter