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All Comments on 'The First Night'

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TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Strange story

Strange story for this category.

I almost felt more like mind control or mature.

Anyway, interesting and well written.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Re:Strange story

I agree that the story seems odd to be in the romance category but mind control, why? This is more romantic than mind control by far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent

I loved reading your story and was looking forward to there being more chapters but was disappointed when I finished reading it to find out you wouldn't be continuing the story. I hope you'll write another one like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Unusual series of scenes. Predictable, but enjoyable. Keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent 5 stars

except for the dom/sub crap, I really liked it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nice

I thought this was very nice. I kept waiting for the raunchy sex, and when it didn't happen, I wasn't disappointed, because it just seemed like it didn't need it. but more chapters to fill out the relationship and add some sex would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Itd be nice if people on here stopped shaming other people's desires. If it's not for you you could've stopped at any moment and went elsewhere but instead you put down the writer....I enjoyed it obviously so please continue

badgirlfan69badgirlfan69over 7 years ago
WHAT?!

Holy crap that was awesome!!!! But why stop the story there? PLEASE PLEASE

continue!!

Renee53Renee53over 3 years ago

I’m loving your writings the more I read. I got the impression of some mind control/hypnosis going on in the background, maybe I’m just projecting my own desire!

Old_Fart2Old_Fart25 months ago

To short and undeveloped…

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

While I'd like more to the story, it seems that there's some sort of control over the girl who did whatever the guy wanted without question. Or as "Old_Fart2" wrote, too short & undeveloped. While other stories have multitudes of chapters, this story leaves me wanting with only the 3/4 page. Hence the 3 stars. The author cheated himself royally! Bob

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