All Comments on 'The Futa Queen Ch. 01'
by bigtittys
- 17 Comments
It was hot as fuck. Kudos for your first story. If I may make a request, I'd love to see her dominate her father or male teachers next.
Not bad for a first story. Maybe a little more time proof reading and small editing details, but pretty hot stuff. Dont know why, but I get a big kick out of these 'daughter Doms mom' kind of stories. Please continue the story line!!
For your first story, this is really good. I think some of the dirty talk was a little over the top, but that's really the only constructive criticism I have. I love that these futa women like receiving as well as giving. Way too many stories only focus on them being dominant. Sonya's adoration of Stephanie and wanting to get fucked is a very nice, refreshing change. More, please!
This was great! I loved it. Only thing i have to say is proofread but other than that great! Keep it going!
It was a very hot story. Hope you will add more chapters into it
i loved this story....please give us more! she is such a bossy big dicked bitch and her sluts love her! plus i loved the romantic ending!
Got me stroking my meat, and that's what it's for right?! Loved the story, although some of the extremities were a little much, like almost EVERYONE is a futa. But I can overlook that for keeping it going so well. Would love to see what you add to it if possible. Good as it stands too. I've been inspired to read other compositions by you.
Great to read a story full of horny, big breasted women, some of them being futa. Great story!