All Comments on 'The Lamia'

Some good descriptive and atmospheric writing in this story.

Enjoyed the story. Hoping for Part 2

Really nice story , 1 of the better femdom stories I'rve read

I was completely drawn in to this story. The use of viagra and the condom were artfully deceiving as to her true nature! The descriptions of sex were fantastic and the entire tone fit the location perfectly! Absolutely terrific.

The only question I had(maybe I just was reading too fast to find out what happens!) was where his blood was coming from. She was scratching and biting him but after the sex you describe a mixture of semen and blood. Or was the blood coming out in his ejaculate as well? That would make sense. It didn't detract from the story at all though.

Thanks! and now I know what a Lamia is.

im not a big fan of this story. the part about the viagra and the condom was interesting though. you are a very creative writer but i think it was too wordy.......

Fun, arousing story, but a little scary for us guys! Thanks!

Absolutely gorgeous (bonnie wee) story. For me it was the perfect mix of building eroticism and explicit delivery. This is certainly my favourite story so far and I shall save the rest on your profile for another night in delightful anticipation.

Loved every word of it. Excellent!