All Comments on 'The Mark of the Immature Man Ch. 02'
by stfloyd56
- 12 Comments
I've been waiting for the conclusion to this story and you did not disappoint. Thank you
Interesting in many ways. Disappointing in others. Evan was a complete asshole for waiting until after ass-fucking Kendra to break up with her. Chapter 3 could be about Kendra's revenge. But the ending was sweet, and since you have made us care about Tina and Evan, I hope they have a wonderful life.
He was kind of a shit head to Kendra, but your heart wants what the heart wants/
This was a fitting end to a beautiful story. Although Evan was mean to Kendra, at least he was accepting of Tina. It had the perfect conclusion that brought all good things back. Certainly better than some of the cuckold non-sense on this site. It truly was heart-warming. You certainly have a knack for writing. This was the first story I read by you, but I look forward to enjoying your other stories as well. Please keep them coming.
I felt the age difference in this May December tale was a bit of a stretch at twenty-five years.
Wow !!!!! You could add more chapters and I would love reading. This was one hell of a story. Maybe one of my favorite !!!
For a story in the Mature category excellent but felt more like romance until start of this chapter and treatment of Kenya. However that fades as they get back together. Well planned and executed throughout with some fantastic lines / comments from Tina. Well done
A really passionate and sexy story, with lots of emotional depth. It is up there, in my estimation, with "Mable's Breasts", another story of an older woman and a younger guy. Some similarities. Anyways, a good read all the way through.
In northern MN 2-2-!!!! Is typically the coldest day of the year: the perfect day to spend indoors before a fire.
GREAT Story!
This story has touched my soul. Half a lifetime ago, I had a Tina in my life for a little while. Circumstances were such that happily ever after was not possible for us, but the things that she taught me about life and love during those five months have stayed with me through the decades since, and continue to make me a better man. Someday I may share a lightly fictionalized telling of my own story with this community. If it turns out half as good as this one I will be thrilled.
Sorry, according to my personal beliefs, it is not a question of maturity or immaturity, but a question of character, no longer to have sex with the woman - especially since the 1st time anal sex for her ! - you KNOW you are going to break up with.
IMVHO Evan is not immature, but just plain and simple an asshole !
This could have been solved differently, better - a real turn-off for me !
Too bad actually !
Therefore only 4/5 stars !