All Comments on 'This Bitch has Lying Eyes'
by Pokerman757
- 20 Comments
So, please write on for the ages.
Make her feel pain like she never imagined existed, the same pain Tony is feeling right now.
Two depressing people. He gets hookers and ignores his wife. She gives up on herself then cheats.
Her divorcd papers were the only thing that came home from his trip and they included the websiteon which she was a star.
With a husband who treated his wife like an unpaid servant rather than a lover and partner.
But really, the one time she cheats and it’s broadcast on video? And if the job pays so well, why do they live in a crappy house? And why does she work as a cashier at 50 years old? Why would she always be late? Hubby leaves at 3:30am and she goes back to bed until 3:30 pm?
What about girlfriends? Family? Do they have kids? If not, why not? And why now? Hubby is gone for weeks at a time and this is the first time she. Heated and they haven’t had sex in 10 years? Really? This isn’t a marriage, it’s roommates without benefits.
...but 10 years without a partner's intimate touch? Serving him a 3am breakfast before he fucks off for a few more weeks?
That's not a marriage.
The only reason she should feel guilty is because she didn't dump his arse first, but putting up with forced celibacy at the hands of the one you gave yourself to? I wouldn't have lasted as long. Maybe she's also just pretty dumb.
Yes I know it is a story so the author makes the odds and the universe they live in.
So now will pokerman end it or continue? I vote for continue along plot line of Tony realizing what he has to lose and the struggle with pain and working through the wreck of their messed up marriage.
If chapter 2 starts with how turned on he is to see wife fucking others I will move to next story.
4 stars
At hotel Mathew suddenly starts calling her Shirley when, at the Bar, she called herself Sandy.
...did she regret it?
I mean, he’s been cheating with hookers all along (which the BTB crowd seems to have missed) paying her no physical attention and she doesn’t seem to know that so maybe HE has the regret?
I give you an enthusiastic “incomplete”!
Fiction means its untrue, not ridiculous.
Just makes me wonder what authors this cheap get from the experience.
his wife, shirley, is a fucking liar.
she said her husband is not interested in sex. or for that matter, her.
what we read at the end, is her husband jacking off. and without knowing it was his wife, complimenting her body.
so the wife cut him off from sex. and then blamed him for their lack of sex. women do this all the time .i don't think they realize how stupid and contradictory they are. women also HATE to communicate. they love to talk. big difference.
husband is old, but not ancient. he'll have more luck in the dating pool than some 50 year old woman, no longer fertile, no huge career, and all the problems of old age.
You know the confrontation. The video he bought. The fact he only watches porn. So the divorce should happen while he's gone.
Thanks!!
Well she obviously didn't, but all was good in the end.
She was right that Tony was unfaithful regularly...with whores.
All she need to was start charging and she would replace her job and be even with Tony. Loving couple that deserve each other.
I guess that the concensous will be for Tony to go all holier than thou on her arse, but hey, what's good for the gander...
As a man who hates cheating this is a life that I might say to a friend if it were them that it was bound to happen. First off hubby fucks when he travels which is often so he’s really been a scumbag cheater for years and it now seems to be also neglecting his wife also . She’s left home alone often and long which isn’t an excuse to cheat but on top of that thinks hubbys sex drive is non existent and don’t want her sexually anymore. Now he’ll be pissed after all these years of neglect and he catches her cheating the one time she does. Again cheating is unacceptable on both ends but you can almost understand this one . I’m 95% sure I couldn’t forgive it but you never know unless your put in the situation. I think the only way I might lossen up is if an immediate confession on a one time thing which is probably not believe it was that one and only time.
Good for her for not putting up with his bullshit anymore. Anyone who doesn’t think she deserved to get some satisfaction after ten years is delusional or Taliban.
I. Can't imagine finding out my wife was cheating this way.
There needs to be another chapter to this to see how things unfold between them.
Gotta be more to this story. Cant leave out the aftermath or the confrontation.
A marriage that is hardly on life support, a neglected wife, starved of attention, and a man who goes away and gets a hooker the first thing when he gets on site.
...a fight to feel alive in a low point leads her to betraying her vows, and she is discovered, after the one indiscretion.
You can imagine his indignation, and the blame and destruction to follow. They'll end up destroyed as a couple, their years of working toward a twilight that while lowly, would have been a reward for their miserable lives.
The end of their marriage justifiable, she did the crime, penance is coming, but he won't be man enough to accept his large part in their downfall, and according to his story, his neglect and indiscretions far outweighing hers.
If she'd had the attention from him that any partner deserves, if he'd reserved his libido for the one he promised it to, and if their lives had been protected with mutual respect, would any of this haves ever happened? None could believe that.
Pain, heartache and failure for nothing. It's just a shame that he won't have his treachery brought to the light of day as well.
This bitch may have lying eyes, but it's a poor name for a story, that sets a presumption with the reader that she's nothing but a duplicitous, adulterous whore. What about the subtitle, which should be something like, "...and this bastard led her to her downfall."
Of all the stories I have read here I have never before seen one where she failed miserably, but where the majority of the blame lay with him.
And this comment comes from someone more than ready to hate a slut for her betrayal.