All Comments on 'To Drink from the Fountain'
by Just_Words
- 14 Comments
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Okay, this is too fucking unfair to even justify as a "dark twist..." For fuck's sake, the ungrateful cunt ruins his life and then she has the nerve to leave him once he gives her another one to boot? Holy shit!
Very nice twist to an age old tale. Except for the active sex life, this could be my biography. Murphy was an optimist!
It is a sad story.
It is a terrific story.
5-stars & Favorite.
to fix your spelling errors. Example: “ As the years past, her demands increased”. You are too good a writer to make such amateurish mistakes. I’ve noticed similar errors in other stories that you’ve written. Please keep writing; your story’s messages resonate with myself and others!
He was destined to make her life the best possible... and he got his destiny, twice.
Well done.
Nicely original and fun.
WOW, such a talented author. Loved it. Sounds to me like he should have divorced his wife years ago.
Thought provoking tale with a very cautionary message. Told very well as usual. BardnotBard
Sad story. But seems surreal that after her getting her youth, and her going back that he coukd no longer be rejuvenated either. But such is fiction. Can't blame her for eventually moving on. He screwed up and did not heed Manuel's instructions.