All Comments on 'TRANCE, Inc. 11'

Can't wait for next chapter! Damn exciting!

Very good indeed. I like that you set up the upcoming chapters of this story, and also his coming to understand things. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Thank you!

A definite 5 star story.

Great character development and building the sense of tension within the story's framework as you left 4 story hooks in place.

1. What's troubling Amber in her past,

2. What is Chance going to do with Carmen & Daisy's parents,

3. When will they move to larger more appropriate living quarters,

4. What is so urgent that Lassiter needs to talk face to face with Chance about at 2 AM.

I love that this mind control story is about people who come to care about each other, and not turning people into mindless automatons.

This is a great series! Please keep writing them!

You can help me...

Hey! It's JC, and I'm here to ask for your professional support.

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With much love,

JC

I love all the build up. There's a lot going on beyond boinking hot babes. Keep up the good work.

Amber has secrets, l bet bad secrets that can get people hurt

5/5