All Comments on 'Wanna Swap?'

Good story. For me, stories that describe events that have the possibility of actually happening are best. While the end game is obvious from the beginning the lead up to the climax is well done. The fact that this story didn't contain fourteen inch cocks and men coming five or six times in succession is refreshing. I've never before read stories by this author but will now be reading all of her/his writings.

This was a great story. Realistic stories like this one are the most exciting to read. You had me hard the whole time!

So fucking Hot! And totally believable. The number of couples who get started in the "Life" of swapping and swinging just like this... is probably astronomical! Lol :-)

Great story. Keep writing more like this, you're a talented writer.

Love Always, Eros <3

Great story. Loved the buildup and the sense of realism.

Great story, awesome build up! Loved it a lot!

I loved swapping, although my wife and his were not that awesome, but the feeling was the same

Been there and done that with two of our best friend couples. Not all at once, just 4-somes. Didn't hurt any of our relationships and my wife and I are still married 51 years on. Lots of nice memories, and no cheating.

Maybe not for everyone, but sure worked for us.

Sensual, erotic, consensual partner exchanges.

It may not work for everyone, or even be of interest, but this was well-written, describing a mutually-agreed swap of loving spouses.

5/5 !

Well written and a good setting, but there was no dramatic tension. Everyone agreed with everyone. Everyone felt the same way. No one was out of synch. That's what creates tension. I gave it 4 stars.

Simple for me... Well written, uncomplicated, direct. As some have already commented, there was not a lot of superfluous and detailed verbiage to wade through. Most exceptional to me was my increasing lust and anticipation at almost every turn in the story. By the time it ended I felt it was one of the best, if not The Best, story I have read here on L. VERY WELL DONE !!!!

I've never been lucky enough to get to do this. But would LOVE to act on it. Well told, nicely done. No real drama or hassles, just great sex.

I found this hard going. Yes, that was a pun!

Consensual sharing. The neighbors that play together stay happy together? (The world needs more unselfish love and diversity, rather than narrow minded, insecure judgmental prejudice?

Jay, your plot was great. Like the other commenters, I enjoyed the sex action among the four friends, but I have just one criticism: your characters are always duplicating each other's actions. There's absolutely no variation between the couples... while one is getting a blow job, so is the other; while one is on her back getting fucked, so is the other.

There needs to be some differences to avoid your story being predictable.

Rye and Ginger

Nice work