by IJS0904
That was about as hot as literotica gets. More than a five! Of course it helped knowing someone hot was sleeping and tomorrow morning I will have to tell her about it as I also show her. Best praise possible for an erotic piece of storytelling
I liked your story very much. Thank you for sharing it. While I agree with some of the criticisms, you took the time to write something and the leap of faith to put it out there. Good for you. My stories are not perfect either but I appreciate the effort you made.
Aside from the name glitches, this was a very entertaining story. Good buildup and slow raising of the sexual temperature among 6 couples. Didn't see the ending coming, but I thought you handled the final matchups well - even the swaps worked. Of course, the focus was on Mandy, but her husband was her anchor and everything came out well in the end.
I find myself wondering if you will write about the next weekend at home...?