All Comments on 'What Happens in Spain Ch. 16'
by BenLong
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I started reading the series at this, the last chapter. That's perhaps not the best way, but I did enjoy the chapter. Now I'll have to go back and read more.
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BenLong writes sex scenes very well, and Chapter 16 is practically nonstop sex. The two men, Terry and Ryan, manage to keep their hands off each other, but the two couples here try and enjoy (to say the least) every other possible sexual combination. Even Irene and Tina's conversations are sexy as hell.
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I especially enjoyed how the story enthusiastically violates just about every tenet of Puritan morality. Irene's male partner is not her husband Oscar but rather Ryan, her lover. Following a wild evening of lesbian sex, anal and genital hetero sex, adultery with two men, and a 4-person orgy, what happens to the two unfaithful wives? They realize they've had the best sex ever and the best orgasms ever. And the experience reveals to Irene how she can be a better corporate executive, a better wife to Oscar, and a better mother to her girls. (Note: the better ways do NOT involve sexual exclusiveness.) And dammit, I think she's right! Ya gotta love Irene. Nice work, BenLong.
Dear Reader - if you made it this far, thanks for reading and enjoying. Now that the story is over, here's where it came from.
Back about 2010 I was approached by a reader who asked if I'd ever written a story on request . I hadn't, but admitted I was always looking for story ideas. His request was that I write a cuckold story - he said his greatest fantasy was to have his wife have an affair - and particularly to rub it in his face that she was doing so.
At the time I had no idea what a cuckold was (actually spelled it cuckhold for a while until a reader pointed out that wasn't how it was spelled). My initial turn-down of his request, ended up being more of a "put on hold" until I read a bit about what a cuckold was, what they thought, etc.and gradually a story idea formed.
I've never written a story, including this one, that didn't have at least nuggets of truth in it. Places I've been, relationships I've had, relationships others have had and relayed to me, things I've witnessed. My initial "hell no" to that first request, over time, became a "maybe", and then a vacation to St. Martin provided a setting, the requestor continued filling me in on him and his wife's ultimate fantasy(s) and gradually "Fantasy Island" came to light. And then, the bashers. No way had I anticipated that there would be so many close-minded readers on Literotica who considered Cuckolds, and cuckold writers - to be the devils spawn.
But several years later, I received another "literature on demand" ask from a man in Spain who LOVED Fantasy Island and wanted to know if I could write another cuckold story - for him (Oscar) and his wife (Irene) - using their real names. Once again a "no, and if it's a cuckold story - HELL no." response, moderated over time to another ... "Maybe".
Make no mistakes - this IS a cuckold story, but unlike Fantasy Island, I approached it from the standpoint of a Good Catholic girl (she was), raised to believe that Catholic Girls make babies by magic (she did) rather than sex, and what if she had a gradual enlightening (as far as I know she hasn't yet, but Oscar is sure hoping...) a sexual experience that opened her eyes? And so, What Happens in Spain" was born. Here's some of the reality:
My good friend in Spain, while vacationing with us, hooked up with a man in Madrid. Married at the time, I was appalled, until she explained that she loved her husband, and he loved her - but she thought that sex and love were two different things - and that when she went home she would tell her husband all about her dalliance - just as he shared with her about his dalliances. Works for them.
Oscar told me that he is a little bit less than average size - and his dream was for Irene to hook up with someone well endowed. I tried to educate him a bit on size, pointing out numerous articles on how there really ain't no such thing as a 12" dick - but still. I modified it, putting Ryan into the upper range of human experience (about 2 standard deviations is what I estimated). Interestingly, my sister in law - who had multiple experiences, probably the most sexually diverse experienced woman I know, told me that only once in all her years had she ever found anyone who was "much" larger than average.
Year ago in California, one of my co-workers, hooked up with what I thought was a random hottie. I was appalled, knowing he was married, and had that "fidelity" thought that marriage must be. He told me that they had an open marriage, they each could play if desired - it was just that they had a "you must tell" in that arrangement. Their "trust" involved not hiding anything. Again I had trouble with that, not really believing he'd totally told her everything - until he said that he hadn't needed to. His statement was "Who do you think hooked me up with her?" It was his wife, who had hooked him up with a co-worker of hers, in from out of town for a week long seminar/training, and in particular watched and masturbated as he fucked her co-worker. I think you'll recognize those scenarios.
Another Scandinavian friend has shared about saunas, rolling in the snow naked, hacking ice to jump into the lake naked and in particular how sauna's themselves are NOT sexual, they're just naked and too dang hot to want to do anything anyway, but that sex after a sauna is common.
A Swedish co-worker from my ABB days told me how "back in the day", inviting the neighbors over for dinner and a sauna meant that the kids got put to bed - and then the adults also went to bed, usually with the others spouse. As he said, "before TV - what else was there to do?" No confirmation of that, but I incorporated it into the story.
The majority of the instances in this 16 part story are based upon real events - just not a single "Irene". Keep in mind it's all erotic fantasy and "just" a story.
As always, thanks for reading and toggle that little 5 star while you're at it.
BenLong
Sorry that it has taken me this long to final get to the last chapter of this Wonderful Hot Erotic Adventure. Irene has truly and totally changed and taken control of her sexual. Oscar will learn to be a better lover and Maria may change her mind about him if they swap. Thank You and glad to complete the reading of all 16 chapters to clear up my backlog of stories that I’m following. I’ve got a Gigolo waiting on deck.