All Comments on 'Who's been Breed'in My Ass? Pt. 01'
by jbrig
- 22 Comments
Wow can't wait to see him confront Mitch about this, if he does. Bent over the couch is an interesting way to do it.
Your stories are great!!!I hope you continue this and the other one where the guy gets dominated by his best friend. Please don't leave us hanging!
Wow, this was hot to read! Can't wait for Part 2..... What will happen when his sons find their big daddy naked, cock rock hard at watching himself raped. Will the sons watch the video? Will he confront his buddy? Oh the possibilities....
I very much enjoyed reading this amazing story. Great cliff hanger! I really look forward to reading what happens next. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!!!
Very hot. I can see this going soooo many places. Excellent Work!!!!
Please please PLEASE hurry up with Part 2! I've been dying to read what happens next - my willy is depending on you!
Please continue. I love mystery stories. Don't leave us hanging. Also love the humor! Terrific!
One of the hottest stories here. So unique. Keep up the great work man ü
What did the boys find? How did dad explain it to them, and what did he do next? This is a most unique approach and deserves "more satisfaction"!!!! Enjoyed his reaction to learning How it happened, but he /WE need to know how he faces the truth - perhaps due to his ex who is not with the new bear? Are the sons involved? So many possibilities.
Really good. Unusual, (I think) plot, but...run spell check and proofread. I didn't write this story so there's no reason why I should be trying to figure out what you meant to write. I've noticed authors getting pissy when readers mention typos. As a reader, typos and mistakes that say you didn't take the time to proofread, seem disrespectful to the reader. If you don't care about your writing, why should I? There are probably thousands of stories on the site alone. Don't give anyone a reason to choose somebody else's work over yours.