by Dshannon
I'm hoping for more installments on this story. Awesome!
that was so great! very realistically written. i loved the last sentences of the story, it made it 10 times better. =)
i must admit it was quite an interesting story. goes to show just how dangerious magick can be if not performed right or without following the basics. one is taught to review what your doing and /all/ of it's effects. i /almost/ feel bad for her. merry part...
I like it. Good pacing and setup, nice flow and no redundancy...Ha, and people wonder why I don't call on outside forces in my magick...
Loved this piece of writing. You did great, it's really hot. :]
I was totally not expecting that :)
Though... in happenstance, it isn't truly a bad thing to have that as your master huh?