- Incest/Taboo
- Working Class Man
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All Comments on 'Working Class Man'
by UltimateSin
- 39 Comments
Outstanding work of excellence. Hot sexy loving and a happy ending. Perfect. I know exactly what a commute in sydney is like having grown up there in the western suburbs. Thank you for sharing.
VERY NICE AND WELL WRITTEN LOVE STORY. THE BEST OF LUCK WITH ALL OF YOUR FUTURE STORIES. THANK YOU.
Very good and to say the story spanned 18 yrs it wasn't a hundred of pages long....lol
Exceptionally well written with a great story line. Something others writing on here would do well to emulate.
The story was progressing really well. I loved the slow build up, the signs that the mother was beginning to feel an attraction to her son without Mark really realising it yet and then out of no where the mother joins Mark in bed in lingerie and seconds later the mother is stripping naked. It just seemed to go completely against the slow build up and them both being instantly okay with it felt a bit off as well. Shame as I was really enjoying the natural build up the story had going for it early on. You are still a good writer though.
Enjoyed the story but I did wonder how his company would pay for maternity benefits when they weren't married and didn't have a license. Well, it's a nice loving story there's no need to nit pick, thanks for writing and sharing.
Love this story and many of your others. Hope the inclusion of pregnancy in this one harkens more frequent inclusion in future stories.
Such a beautiful story, extremely we'll written. Had a lump in my throat at the start and the finish. Thank you!
Fantastic story with a wonderful mix of romance and erotic fun that had an easy natural flow and enjoyable characters. I easily gave it 5 stars.
This isn't a complaint or meant as demeaning criticism, just trying to offer helpful support. I'm not sure if you self-edit your stories or if maybe you sent this one through without, but there are several little typos and the like. In no way did they detract from my enjoyment, and likely the same for most readers.
Again, this is an exciting story and I'm looking forward to more from you in a similar vein. Thank you.
I came to the same conclusion as GingerCat1 - the relationship turned sexual in a weirdly unexpected rush. You're always good with your romance in these stories, no matter the specific category, but this is far from your best work in my opinion.
nice story, but he resisted a bit too much initially i thought, but it is your story.
For some reason, stories that skip ahead to the future for their resolution tend to make me feel sad somehow.
Still, this is a well-structured and artfully written story that deals with enduring live and doesn't get derailed with unnecessary distractions - no infidelities to break hearts and destroy lives.
Sometimes there IS a happily ever after.
I, for one, want to believe in happily ever after - even in my advancing years. 5 stars at least!
A very beautiful love between them it was a touching story. I lo ed every minute of it. I for one could only wish for more like this.beautiful job. Thank you.
A very nice story indeed. Even different from the average incest tale, yet so intrigueing. Well balanced.
Compliments
Great story, but you did it again, UltimatSin! The boy's cock always has to be bigger than his father's? Jeez. Cardinal Sin Number One on this site! You write well, so bravo once more.
Lovely and hot in various measures. Great story with good characters. Thank you for your writing. 5*
I like any good fantasy that ends with hope and happiness. That's how they all should end.
Thanks for taking the time and sharing your thoughts. The story started well, with the detailed description of all that happened between both mother and son, but... However, the story swerved rapidly off course and lost the slow pace of discovery between two people, the apprehensions and fears and, especially from the mother's point of view, it was as if she was primed to sleep with him.
I am sure that many found your story titillating, but I was put off by the mother 'offering' herself to her son. The human psyche is complex and there are certain social and societal constructs that inhibit certain behaviour. It requires an effort to overcome those barriers. The secret lies in overcoming those barriers in a way requiring self-conviction. This self-conviction comes after the logical brain (cortex) gives way to a sensual (primitive) connotation. Even when the barrier is crossed, it is the beauty of maintaining a balance between the two that can make the incestuous 'act' special.
You have put in a lot of effort in this work, and I wish you success.
I always chuckle at the people who complain a story is too long and drawn out... You can see the number of pages before you start, you know what you're getting into...
There were good parts and slightly less good parts (The mom making her move too soon and without any trepidation), but overall I liked it very much!
Beautiful, hot, heartwarming, and a little sad. Another wonderful gem of a story by the man, the myth, the legend. I don't know how you do it. You have real talent. I hope you make money from your talent as it's too good to not get paid for in all honesty. Keep up the great work!