All Comments on 'Workplace Desires'

Nice fantasy

Really enjoyed the imagery at the beginning of the piece. You're a talented writer, which I'm sure if you embellished on your sex scene would have really created an incredible story, but it seems to end as it begins. Better to make a long story than a long series if that's your intention.

Thought this was really neat: sexy, good writing, and a cute little story with a neat little ending.