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Click here"Do you love me?" she said.
"Of course."
"Do you trust me?"
"Yeah, but..."
"I love you and trust you, too. Look Mike, I'm going to tell you something in confidence, okay? You can't tell anyone else. This morning when you noticed my... wet spot..."
"Yeah?"
She took a deep breath. "It was because I was horny."
I stared at her. "Okay," I said.
"Mike... I was aroused... by you. What you did out there, just picking that guy up like he was nothing, your muscles all bulging and straining, and then pinning him to the ground for the win... it did something to me. Maybe because I saw you naked and hard this morning, and saw you..."
"Let's not talk about that," I said.
"Let's do talk about it," she said. "Do you think I'm pretty, Mike?"
"Yes."
"Say it."
"You're gorgeous, Kait."
She grinned. "And do you think I'm sexy?"
"I try not to think of you that way, Kait."
"Does that mean that sometimes you do think about me that way?"
I took a deep breath. "Yeah. Sometimes I do."
Her grin widened. "Yeah, I've seen the way you look at me. Mostly at my tits." She reached down and before I realized what was happening she had pulled the tank top over her head and tossed it onto the floor. My mouth hung open as, for the first time ever, her beautiful naked breasts were on display in front of me. Then she stood up and faced away from me and wriggled out of her boxers, showing me her fine, tight ass. Then she turned towards me again and I couldn't help but stare at her lovely little hairless mound.
"Taa-daa!" she said.
"Kaitlyn!" I said.
"Seems only fair after I saw you naked this morning," she said, and climbed back onto the bed. She poured more oil onto her hand and went back up into my groin, but this time every once in a while instead of just rubbing one of my balls with the back of her hand as she massaged the top of my leg, she alternated between doing that and rubbing the palm of her hand over my entire ball sack. It felt wonderful.
"Kait," I groaned.
"Just enjoy," she said, and moved her hand so that her palm rubbed across the base of my cock.
"Oh, God," I groaned.
"Tight fit," she said, removing her hand. Then she shocked me by reaching into the fly of my boxers and fishing out my hard cock.
"Woah - nice," she said as she stroked it from base to tip. "You have a really nice cock, Mike."
It felt amazing and while I didn't want her to stop, she was my sister.
"Kait, think about this."
"I have been thinking about this," she said as she poured more oil. "All morning." When she started smearing the baby oil onto my erection, it felt so fucking good that I stopped worrying about the fact that I was her brother. She jacked me slowly, using a twisting motion when she approached the head of my cock on the upstroke. Jesus, she was good at this. It felt a thousand times better than when I did it myself.
She was staring at her hand moving up and down on my cock. "God, this is making me so horny," she said. "Lift up your butt."
I did, and she pulled down my boxers, taking care to gently pull my penis back through the fly so it wouldn't bend the wrong way. She wiped the oil off my cock with them, then tossed them onto the floor with her own clothes and looked at me.
"How do you feel about what I'm doing, Mike?"
I couldn't help staring at her tits while I answered. "I'm conflicted, Kate."
"Do you want me to stop?"
"God, no."
She grinned. "Good." Then she bent down and sucked my cock into her mouth.
"Fuck, Kait," I groaned as I watched and felt what she was doing. I'd never even had a girl touch my naked cock, much less with her mouth. It felt warm and wet and when she sucked until her cheeks hollowed it felt tight as she bobbed up and down on me. And she was doing things with her tongue - wonderful things just under the head of my cock. One hand was busy jacking the part of me that wasn't in her mouth while the other played with my balls. Her tits jiggled to the rhythm of her movements. It was hypnotizing.
"Kate... can I touch your breasts?"
She pulled off of me just long enough to say, "Of course," then sucked me back in. I reached down with both hands and palmed her lovely little tits then squeezed them both gently, making her moan. I rubbed both of her nipples between thumb and forefinger, and she shivered.
The combination of what she was doing and the excitement of touching a girl's body this way had me on the edge.
"Kait, careful, I'm gonna cum."
"Mmmhmm," she said, and increased her speed and the power of her sucking. The hand that had been playing with my balls moved under my butt and I felt a finger start playing with my asshole. It was too much.
"GAAAAH!!" I screamed, and erupted into Kait's mouth. She pulled back so that just the head of my cock was in her mouth, and I knew I was spurting directly onto her tongue. My orgasm seemed to extend from her finger on my asshole through my body and balls to the tip of my cock, and upwards into my chest. I saw spots and my lips were numb. I was vaguely aware of Kait moaning and swallowing. I realized that I was squeezing her tits very tightly and let go, and collapsed onto my back.
Kait softened her sucking as the last dribbles of my cum trickled into her mouth and I became too sensitive. She used her thumb to run along the bottom of my cock, forcing the last little bit of semen onto her tongue, then sat up. She opened her mouth and stuck her tongue out to show me a small wad of my jism, then sucked it back into her mouth and swirled it around before swallowing it and smacking her lips. She laid down on top of me, every bit of her front touching mine. My hands found her tight little ass, and squeezed. She was tiny and gorgeous and perfectly proportioned.
"That was fucking hot," I said.
"Yes it fucking was," she said, sighing.
"Why did you do it, Kait?"
She looked up at me. "I love you," she said. "And I told you that you made me horny this morning seeing you naked and hard and cumming. Hell, I get horny all the time seeing you parade your muscles around in your underwear, or a towel, or your tight little wrestling uniform. You know that girls can totally see your junk when you wear that thing, right?"
I blushed. The guys on the team were used to it; I'd never thought about anyone else looking there.
"Then when I watched you lift that guy like he was nothing, and later when I found out you were protecting my honor, I knew I was going to do this." She kissed me lightly on the lips, then kissed me again, a longer kiss. A lover's kiss. I felt her licking my lips, and when I opened my mouth to do the same, she pushed her tongue into my mouth and moaned. I felt myself getting hard again under her, and she rubbed herself against it.
"Mike, are you a virgin?"
I blushed and looked away. "Yes."
She lightly grabbed my chin and forced me to look at her. "There's nothing to be embarrassed about. Everybody's a virgin until they aren't anymore. It just means there's this one thing you haven't done yet." She rolled onto her side, exposing her luscious front to me, grabbed my hand, and led it down to her mons. She rubbed my finger into her slit, gasping a bit as it went into her far enough to feel the warmth and wetness.
"I want to be your first, Mike. If you'll have me."
I was boiling hot for her and apparently she was for me, too, and I had the strong sense that nobody was thinking clearly here.
"Kait, your my sister. We shouldn't be doing any of this at all. We certainly shouldn't make love."
"Don't you want to?"
"Yes, I absolutely want to, but it's wrong. It's incest."
"So? We love each other and we're hot for each other and we're both adults. Who cares what a bunch of people we don't know would think?"
"I'm pretty sure Mom and Dad would not approve," I said as I moved my hands up to play with her breasts. My actions weren't corresponding to my words, but I couldn't help it. I might never get another chance.
"I'm not planning on telling them," Kait said. "Are you?"
"No."
"Then fuck me, Mike. I love you and I want this. I want you. Please."
Shit, how could I resist? I loved her too, and she was beautiful and naked in my bed and begging me for it. I responded by slowly moving down her body and using my mouth on her breasts for the first time. I slowly licked circles around the areola of her right breast and she gasped and held my head to her breast as I sucked her nipple into my mouth. I repeated the action on the other breast as my hand kneaded the one my mouth had just left. She moaned, "Inside me Mike, now please."
"No," I said as I continued to work my way down her tummy and onto her mound. Her musky smell there was intoxicating. I spread her legs and lifted her butt and made one long, continuous lick starting from her asshole (which made her moan), over her perineum, and over and between her little outer lips. She shrieked when I reached her clitoris.
"You don't have to, Mike, but if you want to you'll have to go easy on my clit to start. It's very sensitive."
"I want to. You taste delicious. You'll have to teach me, though; I only know what I've seen on porn."
"Everything you did felt wonderful," she said. "Just start slow on my clit. I usually make little circles around it. You could do that with your tongue."
I tried it and was rewarded by moaning and wriggling and jerking hips. This was fun! I moved lower and inserted my tongue into her pussy as far as I could and wiggled it around.
"Lick my lips, then my clit," she said, breathing hard. I did so, repeatedly. Her clit was to the point where it would take direct light pressure now; touching it just made her moan.
I decided to change it up and moved lower and started rimming her asshole.
"Oh God, Mike, what are you doing to me? That's so nasty but it feels so good!"
I licked and kissed her rosebud and tried to push my tongue in, but she was too tight there. So back to her clit I went, but this time I pushed two fingers into her tight pussy and with the other hand I reached up and played with a nipple, all the while moving the flat of my tongue back and forth across her clitoris, occasionally using just the tip of my tongue to give it a little light lashing. Nipple, clit, pussy. Multitasking.
Her breathing grew ragged. "Oh, I'm gonna cum, Mike. You're making me cum. You're gonna make me..."
Her body tensed and she screamed, "MIKEEEEEEEYY!!" and she began thrashing around the bed, her legs doing their best to crush my skull and her hips pushing me upwards. I'm strong, but I was no match for her gymnast muscles when she was in this state.
"Oh fuck, oh fuck, oh fuck!" she chanted as her body convulsed. "In me, Mike, right now! Right now!!"
I got on my knees and pushed her legs apart and lined myself up with her pussy and pushed. She was hot and wet, but so tight that I had to move the head of my cock up and down against her hole to get it lubricated before I pushed again and finally sank the head of my cock inside her.
"Oh God, Mike, keep pushing in. It feels so good."
"Yeah, it sure fucking does, Sis," I said. That sentence sounded weird in my head but it wasn't enough to stop me now. I kept pushing and she kept thrashing until I was fully buried inside my beautiful sister. Her pussy was like a warm, wet vise around me. Her hands grabbed my ass to hold me still and we concentrated on our breathing until we were both a little calmer.
"Mike, I have a secret to tell you," she said.
"Yeah?"
"You're my first, too."
Out of nowhere, tears came to my eyes and splashed on her cheeks. She wiped them from my face and smiled at me.
"Why are you crying?"
"I don't know. It just came over me when you said that. Somehow, this is kind of perfect."
"Yeah, it is," she said.
"Kait, the hand job and the blow job... you seemed so expert at them..."
"I didn't say I was totally unexperienced," she said. "I just haven't had anybody inside me. And nobody's gone down on me. Which reminds me, by the way: you don't need any instruction for that. You're a natural."
I blushed. "Thanks," I said.
"What gave you the idea to lick my asshole?"
"I don't know. I've seen it on porn, and thought I'd try it. You seemed to like it."
"I loved it!"
"Then I'll do it again for you."
"Okay, but not right now. Right now I want you to fuck me, Mike. Fuck me and make love to me."
I kissed her hard and we stared into each other's eyes as I started moving inside her, and she moaned with pleasure.
"I love you Kait," I said.
"I love you too, Mike. Faster. Please, faster. Fuck me hard."
I propped myself up onto my hands and increased my speed until I was pounding into her and our skin was slapping together. I played with her tits and her eyes closed and she looked like she was concentrating on something.
"I'm going to cum again, Mike," she said. "I can feel it building. Keep going."
"I'm gonna cum, too," I said, slamming into her. "I'm gonna cum so hard."
"Cum inside me," she panted. "I'm safe. I want to feel..."
She broke off as her body tensed. She wailed with release and her pussy convulsed around me and her hot juices bathed my cock and it drove me over the edge.
"I'm cumming!" I said.
"Look at me," she said. "Look in my eyes! I want to watch as you cum."
I stared into my lovely sister's eyes as I buried myself into her and my body exploded into orgasm and I shot everything I had deep into her pussy. The extreme pleasure made me close my eyes and throw my head back to savor the feeling.
A little later, still buried in her, I kissed her and stroked her hair.
"I'm sorry I broke eye contact," I said.
"That's okay. I got to watch your 'O-face'. That's all I wanted."
"You came too, right Kait?"
She wrapped her arms around me. "Yeah, you made me cum, you big stud."
That made me feel good. And proud.
"How was your first time, Mike?"
"Amazing. Wonderful. Kinky. Loving. How was yours?"
"The same. Are you still worried about the fact that you're fucking your sister?"
My cock had been softening, but hearing "fucking your sister" brought new life to it. I rolled onto my back, rolling her on top of me. I started thrusting into her from below.
"Does that answer your question?" I said.
"Oh yeah, Bro; good answer." She leaned back and started bouncing on my cock, her perky little tits shaking to her rhythm. It felt great but after a while I felt like changing it up and being in charge again.
"Hands and knees, Sis," I said.
She raised off of me and complied. "Are you gonna do me doggie?"
"What do you think?" I said. I took up position behind her and sank my hard cock all the way in as she moaned contentedly.
"Do me, Mike. Do me hard. Give me all of your cock."
I grabbed her hips for leverage and started slamming into her from behind.
"Oh, yeah, Mikey, that's so good. You're so deep in me. I love this position!"
"Me, too, Sis."
I reached around and grabbed her perky little tits and continued to pound into her hard. My hard cock was coming almost all the way out of her pussy and slamming all the way back in every time. The bed was squeaking and our skin was slap-slap-slapping and Kait was yelling, "Fuck me, Mike! Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me!!"
And that's how Mom found us.
- COMMENTS
Cum inside me, I'm safe.....????? WTF, thought she was a virgin? Sure don't need a incestous pregnancy. That was a very surprising ending......
I have to agree with everyone, this story deserves additional chapters. this is amazing and the ending, what a cliffhanger... so many unanswered questions.
Absolutely one of, if not THE best story I've ever read on here, or anywhere else!!! This one had it ALL for a first-time fuck! Six stars and FAVORITE status - which I don't give often.
Ssswwweeeeeetttttt!!!!! Very nice story, and the ending...!!!
Why is there no follow-up to this printed/posted yet??!! Mom...hhmmmm??!! Sounds like an even kinkier plan than just Mike and Kait!!
Five**5**Star story!! Mostly, because Mike defended Kait's honor...I wonder if Coach went after opposing team's coach, for that crappy attempt to distract Mike!! His response (Mike's) was totally cool!!
🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🌋💯
Sundragon796,Did you not read the part where she told him she was a virgin too?And that she wanted him to be her first?Reading comprehension helps you to not look foolish when asking a question that's clearly answered in the story..🤦♂️
Really, seriously, that's how you ended that wonderfully sweet story? Sighs, what a shame.
Oh no you don't. You leave us hanging with that last sentence after such a good story
Great story, needs more! Sexy, emotional, human
I know, it was 8 years ago....
These two do not seem to have reached anywhere near the end of their road....
Five for you
A good story and a rating of four. would have been a 5 had their been a description of abundant Pussy Hair
Aaah! Great story, but it's the second one I read in a row that ended with a cliffhanger that you never resolved.
Good story. I liked it very much. Please continue with the mother getting involved.
It could have been written a little better. Was Kait not a virgin? Something to think about. Could also been a little longer
Love it. Sister brother stay lovers. Mom can join but no dad. And where's chapter 2??
(1/22/2023) Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. but it's been eight years since mom found them bumping uglies. You added a new chapter to your “A New Dawn” series two months ago so we know you’re still writing. Please continue this love story. But please, no daddy doing Kaitlyn. She belongs to Mikey. Five stars and this goes on my favorites list.
VERY good. Excellent progression of the action. Contains enough details to increase the believeability of the relationship. But the part I loved the most is the very last line: "that's how Mom found us".
6*
BJ
Why do I have a feeling that Mom is gonna want some too. Maybe Dad can join in, too.
Outstanding, you must follow this up with an all family affair..........():\
So sweet and so torrid !
Theyre just fine together, and I believe that a spontaneous episode of
“The Breakfast of Champions” … 69 would seal the deal of their ❤️❤️, yes ?
I think so 🍸🍸
Excellently comprised, and a sweet read .
Keep the bro & sis loving and going !
Excellent, compact story. Great character build up, A sequel is definitely needed...
Outstanding story: compact, to the point (of contact), fast paced and lovable. I would like to know how long it took this Hulk to get into his mom? Any little rug rats in the works, (with either one or both females)?
5*
BJ
Short sweet and to the point....of no return???? I'd be interested to know what happened after 'and thats how Mom found us'..... Kind of like getting caught naked by the COPs parking with your girlfriend.....LOL
too many "off ofs" and superfluous "ofs" as well. would have been 5 stars otherwise...
great story, stupid american sloppy...
I didn't know that the mom had lost them. Good thing they made enough noise so that she could find them. Good thinking.
WHAT CAN I SAY........GREAT......COULD DO WITH MORE,DOES MOM LEAVE THEM TO IT ! DOES SHE FLIP HER LID ! DOES SHE GET PERSUADED TO JOIN !
It had 5 stars until the last line, then it was just another unfinished story. Damn!
I enjoyed the story, but would like to read about what happens next. I suspect the Mother is mad.... maybe she is a sister and married her brother... maybe the Mother as a secret incest about her Brother or a parent member. Just a few of my thought's about what happens and the aftermath of the discovery.
This story is probably the bestest I've read here so far.
Please, please, don't fuck it up with another chapter.
Great story, great finish.
I hope there are more chapters. This story has so much potential.😄
please continue, but keep them exclusive. sibling love is the purest form of love. great story.
Oh so nice. What a story. So well written. I love it. Reminds me of personal experience.
Like others have said I'd love a sequel but leave the mom out of the bed with them please.
A sequel PLEASE! Maybe have sis knocked up by bro and maybe a threesome with mom getting pregnant as well.
spoken like a true immature little lezzie
A fashion trick? Hardly dearie. Women have been happily shaving their pussies since the invention of the safety razor! Hell, probably some really adventurous ones used straight razors before that! Lol.
Does it add a little girl look? Yeah, for some women, others it just doesn't. While that's always a naughty fantasy most guys won't admit to, it's just secondary anyway. I love going down on bald pussy, there's nothing like a smooth pussy on my cheek and tongue! Shave myself, add some oil and it feels really amazing!!
My girl doesn't call me daddy, but she does shave her pussy, without me asking! Oh, and gee, we've been married longer than you've been fucking. If anyone can find it in that forest of hair! ;)
shaved pussy...a fashion trick to make models look younger and wear skimmer swim suits picked up by Playboy nudes same reason. women's libbers have been wildly successful in making men into pussy's for 35 years. the little boys under 40 want a little girl NOT a woman with a hairy pussy. I laughed my ass off at a recent article, when women want a man for marriage THERE AREN'T ANY!!! LOL!!!!! Men today are WIMPS can't handle a woman they are not man enough...
Great, tight, believable short story
More please.
You took us to the top of the hill and then left us there! All panting with excitement and wondering what is to follow. If this follows the normal format Mom joins in...but I have this sneaking suspicion it will be better than that!
I loved the way they discovered their mutual attraction
but
There's no way he could have performed as physically aggressive as depicted with a groin pull.
This was one of the hottest stories I've read here. Your surprise ending just leaves us wanting more. You absolutely MUST continue this story line! What happens when Mom finds them?
Seriously. I'm at a complete loss for words. Calling this "amazing" is an understatement, and a serious discredit to the story. Everyone else has pretty much run the gambit of adjectives for describing how good this was. They've also pleaded enough with you to write a sequel of some sort that my doing so would be pointless at this point, especially since it has been over 2 years since you published this story. But that ending was 'priceless': "I reached around and grabbed her perky little tits and continued to pound into her hard. My hard cock was coming almost all the way out of her pussy and slamming all the way back in every time. The bed was squeaking and our skin was slap-slap-slapping and Kait was yelling, "Fuck me, Mike! Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me!!" And that's how Mom found us." There are a couple of old sayings that apply perfectly to this story: 1) "Leave your audience wanting more.", and 2) "Leave them laughing."; and chunks that is exactly what you did, but leaving your audience wanting for 2 years is a bit much- it could affect your following- so it's about time for something new from you.
OMG! The ending was absolutely perfect! I smiled. Just brilliant!
Now you HAVE to write a sequel to this! There's no way you can leave us hanging with that cliff-hanger. I gave this 4-stars, one below my all-time favorite story of yours. I've really enjoyed this story, and have especially been a fan of your other incest story, Making Out With Mom, for years now. It's seriously good to see you're still writing, but I seriously think you should consider adding more Incest stories to your catalogue. I think you're really underrated as an author and could be excellent in the genre.
Yeah, some people fail to recognize irony, and some just seem to need to just bitch. But seriously, "a woman who sleeps with more than one man in her lifetime is a whore"???
Then I guess the world is full of whores. I mean what the fuck, that came from WAY out of left field! Welcome to reality putz.
The story was really good, and like tranzmany above, my immediate reaction to mom's appearance was, "Oh shit!!!" And then a laugh followed.
There was also a very touching part as well that I appreciated.
Overall I thought it was pretty damn good, and gave it five stars.
I don't know if it should be continued but, if you do, I'm sure it'll be something good.
From you I have come to expect no less.
little boy anonymous giving his comment a tltle of "too funny" who says it was shit has no idea what there talking about.
Go away n grow up, if youve nothing constructive to say then fuck off..........
As for you chunks, carry on writing please and ignore this prick
Great story, good build up and i just enjoyed it remembering some parts of wheni wanted to fuck my sister but only got a wank from her, shame.
5* cheers
So... What happens now that their mom found them with the bloody bedsheet and all? Not that I want to know... But WE all NEED to know. Please?
God, so hot. I'm dripping wet, and I want a part two. It's the perfect story to masturbate to, and my pussy is so hot.
i hope he bred the slut for "white privilege" WHAT A CROCK OF SHIT!!!
You can't end the story there, come on now for God sake. What happens next. Does mum get thrown on her back and gets fucked as well , finish this story....
What a crock of bull shit! You make your own damn way, no one need taken care of. The lazy expect others/government to be sugar tit. FUCK THEM!!!
Would have been a 5/5 but the ending brought it down without a followup.
You left the door wide open for another chapter. How bad or well did mom take it finding her kids in the throus of hot sex?
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Please explain who frock is Wilson you said his name was Mike Thomas pay attention to your writing/>
I heartily apologize. As I mentioned at the beginning, I didn't do my usual editing thing. In the future I'll try to live up to the quality of your stories...
Oh, no stories from you? Ah. Well then. I guess I'll just do whatever the fuck I want.
Thanks for the feedback!
Nothing finer - from a brother who had a twin sister. First looking and touching around 11 - by 13, love was in the air. Many memories still roll through my mind. This five star story brings love from long ago back to the front of my thoughts.
. . . the day that I made love to my sister for the first time.
Admittedly I had experience, but she was a virgin.
When she took my cock in her mouth she made love to it and then begged me to fuck her.
We lived like man and wife for over 10 years, in a country far away from ours, unfortunately she was killed in a road traffic accident over 20 years ago.
I had a few short relationships since and eventually married for good to a woman I love, but none of my relationships were ever as loving and the sex hasn't been as fulfilling as it was with my sister.
Still dream of her sometimes, and it's always a "wet" dream.
It would be nice to see a sequel to this one, you planted the seed already!
My brother and I were each other's firsts. We did it on our 16th birthday. We are twins. While we each got other boyfriends and girlfriends, we had sex at least once a week until we went away to college, then we had it everyday. We both went to Syracuse and mom and dad got us an off campus apartment. We just told everyone we were married to explain the same name.
that teenagers, and both virgins, are such experts at foreplay, cunnilingus and fellatio. Lots adults aren't half as good at sex as these teens.
I'm reading this the second time around! ...just randomly ran across it! I'd forgot to add a thought last time I posted. ...after he lays down for a nap after all the awesome lil sister sex, he won't be able to stand up at all, much less walk, lol! He basically just hit that groin injury with a sledge hammer! Hehehe ;) ...thats gonna huuuuurt!
Still in love with the story! Love the forward sister knowing what she wants and going after it! The brother wasn't too cliche' with his 'but your my sister' routine, heh... No way a guy would open his mouth saying anything negative if his hottie gymnast sister was jacking him off! Rofl ;)
...loved that they were both virgins.
A beautiful story full of love. You can't not finish it. We all have our own imaginations but reading it from a very good writer can be more rewarding. Bring mom in somehow and finish it!!!!
Very very HOT, first Kait's wet spot, then her rubbing and t he hand/fingers and blowjob into screwing ..... she is as horny as he is and knows what she wants. It's good they talked through it. The strong orgasms they gave each other will stay in their minds now. Of course being found by their Mom finishing doggie style might not be a hit !! Maybe, Mom might want to get what Kait got ??? I guess his muscle pull is all better now ? Thanks and hope for another chapter.
I felt that this was going to be just another mediocre story. I am glad to say that I was wrong. For an unedited story it was refreshingly clean and error free. It was just the thing to whet my appetite for more, as two pages is really just a preview of what could be a marvelous journey. Having a gymnast partner is the dream of many a randy male, and being as it is his sister that sets the stage for some fun times. Please explore these characters fully in future chapters.
Lol!! That's a hell of a way to end it! ROFL ;)
Wow, I love your writing style. ...and I really liked the way she led Mike down the path :)
...I hope you continue soon, thanks for writing it!!
5*
Yes, I agree with the other readers. A 2nd Chapter Please! I also agree that it should stay siblings only. Mother can approve, but beyond that she should not participate.
Great characters. Great interactions. Only had the slightest dissonance hearing that an eighteen an nineteen year old were both still virgins.
That last line "And that's how Mom found us." made me burst out laughing!
If there's a sequel, I just hope it doesn't turn into a family fuck-fest...
Wonderful story . . . . love the two kids . . . . love their attitudes about each other and their love . . . love their irresistible mutual attraction . . . Why did you have to have mom catch them? If there is a Part 2, and I really hope there is, please turn mom into a guilty hallucination or something. These two deserve some very happy together time. Love your way with dialogue.
A very good story... Really sweet.. Hope you don't ruin it with a second second part involving another person...
A big sister who loves you and only you, who's not another man's leftover.. And not just because she's a young girl, she's older than you, so she really did save herself for you...
What stories lack is just that.. People are happy with leftovers these days.. I hate it when stories contain shit like you're better than anyone I ever had..
A woman who has slept with more than one person in her entire life is a whore. And a story about a whore serves no purpose.. Better to watch porn if all you want is a whore..
I'm so happy you're over your dry spell (we all suffered) and have reunited with your muse. Yours is a rare talent.
Please explain who frock is Wilson you said his name was Mike Thomas pay attention to your writing
In Part 2, Mom is just standing there smiling! Mom confesses to the kids that she and their Father are not just their parents, but they, too, are Brother & Sister! After this, Mom strips and joins in the fuckfest....
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Not everybody gets irony.
Wow
Truly wonderful. I relate to Kait totally. While I have never wrestled with incest for real, I have wrestled with secret desires for my older brother as long as I remember. I am happy that others feel the same way. I long for even one night with him.
Amy
What a fantastic story! Excellent, realistic dialogue makes the sister so real I can feel her tongue in my ear right now. Awesome writing!
Hope you continue this one. It should be very interesting where the storyline goes in light of what happened.
great story....you need to continue your writing
closes the door and says, "kids, there are some things you need to know".
Nothing left to do but end the story. Perfect ending to a great story.
I get the impression that the whole point of the story was so you could pull that surprise ending. The writing is good, and it started out with promise, but you didn't develop the character interaction and plot much before the fucking started. The wrestling with incest should just be a pun. You had the chance for real dramatic tensio , and let it slip away. Also, the sibs behavior in the bedroom had none of the flavor of the relationship you described between them at the start. One more thing: no one in high school builds up a nest egg by investing. Investing what? Paper route money? Anyway, don't give up on this. Rewrite it and spend some more time on it.
One of the best, written by one of the BEST! Thank you for all your stories. Hope we don't wait long for Part two. *****
She rolled onto her side, exposing her luscious front to me, grabbed my hand, and led it down to her mons.
Who says that???
No guy especially teen or 20 something would say that. The story was good up until that paragraph.
A very familiar story and the family is just too good to be true.
And by ASAP, I mean like yesterday!!! Please do not make us wait like some of your past multi-chapter stories. By the way, no distracting mistakes in spelling, grammar, punctuation, etcetera.
...tell me you're not buying in on that 'white privilege' crap and that everything Confederate is racist.
Like it had good build up and a cool ending .Hope you do more with it .Gave it a 5 .
I absolutely agree that this is a chapter worthy story.
It would be a disservice to not continue it.
I'm hoping for long and interesting content. And of course plenty of teaching from mum.
With their school being named Robert E Lee, they might be cousins as well as brother and sister. I would almost bet "Mom" joins in.....
this is one sexy awesome story!!! Lets hope mom is really horny. thanks
This is a Grrrreat one !!! ... I fully agree with all the responders here -- you MUST continue with ch.2 ,ch 3... and more !!!
VERY cool! *W*...The sister seemed soooooooooooo into it. Wonder how/what the mom will say and react to? *W*
Keep writing! *S*
A crime if you didn't continue the storyline. Nice work on what you did, but that last sentence is all I can think about.
Please continue this story! It's absolutely wonderful and special.