by creativeboyinspring
I was waiting for the sequel, and I am not disappointed. Some situations happen because they had to, but I appreciate that the author tried to keep things plausible. Story is sexy, I hpe next chapter will come soon.
OMG, I'm only on page 2 at the moment, but you have me LOL. I have only newly discovered you as an Author, having devoured at least a third of your stories here on Literotica, but I never thought you were a comedian. You truly have the sense to write such stuff. Normally I would at least have finished a story before commenting. But you have done such a wonderful job of making me laugh (and few do that) that I had to say something immediately, as in right NOW, about it. Bravo. You are a friggin' creative genius. God I wish I could repay you. Oh well, karma and all, somebody else will in some way pay you back as you Deserve, I pray. Thank-you, thank-you, for all your efforts here. For this gem and your other works of high Art. - greg
You did great job on these stories. Well detailed and a nice build up. You definitely have a talent for this. I'm a NC and breast man myself (as you can see in all of my stories here on the site) and I truly appreciate yours. Maybe you'll read some of mine and comment on them as well. Thanks for such an entertaining and sexy fantasy. I am definitely looking forward to part 3. Who knows...maybe he will bring some friends over to help teach them all a lesson!
Very well done! I hope you're putting your fertile mind to work and create additional chapters. This scenario and these characters have a lot of potential.
God I hope this ends with him in control of his entire family. Dad as a little bitch and Mum and Sis both pregnant with your main character's babies. Made to dress up in outfits he likes that keep them easily accessible too. You are an absolute genius, you create incredible scenarios and characters. Can't wait to read more of both this and your other works.
Belle histoire, sa sœur apprécie vraiment. Peut être qu'elle va réclamer une autre séance ? Son frère devra se dévoiler et la soumettre (genre maitre et soumise). Je ne pense pas que les parents vont parler à la police à mon avis ils ont trop honte d'avoir pris du plaisir. J'espère une suite bientôt.
Je viens de relire les deux chapitres, et je partage l'avis du lecteur précédent : le "héros" devrait s'imposer entant que maitre de la famille. Soumettre ses parents, sa sœur lui est pratiquement déjà soumise. Comment réagira t'elle si il lui dévoile son identité ?
I need to be adopted into this family, I’ll be their little whore❤️❤️❤️
I have to agree with another comment about your comedic abilities. This story is not only somewhat plausible, weirdly hot, and made me laugh out several times 😂
I’m a little confused. Part one he says he only came once on her tits before the parents came home. Part two he says he’s cum multiple times and abused her in many ways with bruises and red marks. I’d like to read about those multiple orgasms and abuses. Other than that a very enjoyable story so far.