by Long2bLocked
The only word that comes to mind about this story is MASTERPIECE. Top draw writing once again, thank you.
Well that is just freaking amazing. Turning romantic but still completely dominant, this was great. One of my favorite BDSM stories I've read on here without a doubt.
A masterful work of erotica!
You nailed it….sexual tension, character development, tempo and pacing of the story, the D/s dynamic, sub space…..all well written.
Each scene in this chapter was arousing on its own, and you sequenced it perfectly for a climactic ending!
Excellent!
Thank you….
Just epic. Long2BLocked...you had me from the very first "STRIP!" Well done.
The best story i’ve ever read! Truly enjoyed ever word and sentence. Hope they both live happily ever after!
Absolutely wonderful! I enjoyed each and every chapter and looked forward to each one. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
Amazing. Well done. From beginning to end. It felt so real to me. I give stories I really like five stars so that others will see and enjoy them, but this is a rare gem that is truly a five star masterpiece. You do so many things right. Everyone should read this.
My god, it became a love story! A very erotic, lusty, love story.
Well done, well written, well closed!
Ugh! Shes nuts. Its all just too much. The chastity, the beatings, the dog cage, The public humiliation. Not healthy, He sould be relaxing playing golf, or fishing, something other than this silliness.
Thanks for telling this story and sharing an obvious passion. Thoroughly enjoyed this over the last few days and look forward to reading more of your efforts. Yum.