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Click hereWe feel it all around all the time
In the warm breeze of a lovers whisper
Haunting the dim hallways of an abandoned home
It is in our hands and around our minds
Where the sun nearly reaches under a tree
Even under the scurrying of the smallest bugs
When the siren wails through empty night
And the laughter boiling form a playground
The quiet mutterings of the man asking for change
It is in the smile of the old woman on the bench
In the sunset light playing on a pond
The silent watches of the spider in its web
Dwelling in the seething of the teenage idealist
Hidden in the kind words of the random stranger
Beaming from the eyes of a friendly dog
Laid out in the spray of newspaper
Plastered on the constant billboards blare
Flying in the morning breeze on the water
We feel it deep as a building burns
And not at all when we stare in the foggy mirror
But it is there all the same whether or not
In the glint of a knifes cold heartless edge
On the dull glow of a warming ember
Above the shimmers of the cooking asphalt
And we only wander through it
Unaware of its ubiquitous presence
Moved by what we simply cannot see
It's a very powerful piece of writing, especially because you never actually say what "it" is. Leaving that definition to the reader is very good, imo.
I think it could be better if you cut back some of the unnecessary words that make the poem sound a little repetitious. But overall it's good, interesting writing. Thanks for posting it. :-)