All Comments on 'beauty'

make a comment on this poem because "Tracing paper" has already been commented on. This poem is equally grabbing - both in subject and presentation, some lovely imagery. Well done!

always intrigues me. Something about it, the kind of sideways lines that work so well.

jim :)

up take falling to

new

sights down is the up side

held from toes

"I died for beauty but was scarce"

Nicely done ~ pulling the reader in with all your descriptions, then your creating a sound for the reader to imagine as though this were an audio poem.

This rendering has an almost mystical quality to the way it's worded.

tokens of life. VALUES SOAR. TK U MLJ LV NV