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Click herePanting breath past parted lips
Heaving breasts lift in aching need
Tingling flesh shivers in delight
Lustful passions scream to be freed
Searching fingertips over heated flesh
Trembling lips leave a searing trail
Shifting thighs brush in helpless want
Trust heart, oh so frail
Exquisite limbs and aching form
House the slut within
Broken dreams and shattered heart
Present the girl called cyn
- COMMENTS
This was my favorite part:
Exquisite limbs and aching form
House the slut within
I'd rethink the cliche of lustful passions.
and "slut within" is perfectly acceptable and fits the person as well as the poem.
Syn
for the phrase "slut within"...it just seems so at odds with the rest of the piece...overall, great work.