- Erotic Poetry
- Dark Thoughts
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Click hereEscaping into the dark recesses of my mind
It’s not safe in here as you would think it should be
Alone with my thoughts and fantasies
My mind wanders to places that I shouldn’t be
To my slave to do with him all sorts of wicked acts
I use, abuse and humiliate my willing pet
The pleasure derived from my evilness shocks me
And yet drawn to it I am, eager for more
Stretching my boundaries as I push his limits
Discovering within me a lust for depravity
His thirst for me only fueling my wanton desires
Deep down inside my mind there is no safe word
- COMMENTS
A good editor would have tightened this up -- but nobody would touch your final line, your final phrase, your three final words.
. . . what we find inside of us when we stumble into unexplored territory.
The poem is so beautiful and honest, even if starkly so...very very well written indeed...!
I felt awed when I read it...i think you'll understand why...!
in today's New Poem Reviews. I think if you expanded on what you are saying, be more descriptive,this could be much more powerful. Thanks for sharing.
there is said to be a dark side somewhere deep inside... but normally it is controlled and never finds the light of day... But then, there are some where it breaks free.. You captured it well inside your poem.